Identity Crit - rybo
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- Bluejam0
make the logo smaller
- ********0
i'm still waiting to see something you have done that doesn't have diagonal lines in it.
- BaskerviIle0
despite the credit crunch you seem to have lots of work on, do we all get a cut since we're essentially consultants for you
- ********0
skt im still waiting to see anything from you!!
- http://www.qbn.com/t…********
- anyway, you should get rid of the diagonal lines. i'm not sure if you worked out that;s what i meant.********
- got no clients so your entering competetions********
- oooh, zing.********
- I find it very hard to believe that 'Sriran' is a real company********
- http://www.qbn.com/t…
- Spookytim0
Personally I think you've got a bit too much going on. Delete the reversed letterhead. It has no relevance and confuses the issue.
Too many angles... Sriran at an angle, with chevrons/lines at another angle.
Don't like the cyan type on the BC. Also on the BC I would make a decision to either bring the circle comfortbly inside the trim, or definitely cropping off the trim, but most printers will fuck up trying to trim the card exactly where the edge of the circle is. Just my humble opinion, but I wouldn't bother.
I think the logo has promise, but maybe you're trying to add visual interest with the cutline on the S and n, and maybe the job would be cleaner with the type in a circle and no fannying about.
- The black is too heavy too. Simplify, SIMPLIFY.Spookytim
- ian0
IT consultants? Whats the concept behind it or their target?
I'm not keen on the business cards, I think the mark is far too big for them, but the rest looks ok. Except the letterheads in black, nightmare to fax, I'd say or is that something that even needs to be considered anymore?- I'd say it does cause people I work with fax all the time
Glitterati_Duane - Yeah, I know, thats why i mentioned it, just wasn't sure what others are doing in regard to this.ian
- I'd say it does cause people I work with fax all the time
- ********0
The concept i came up with a conversation with the client they are the solution to a problem instantly, trying to fit a square into a circle came to mind.
The Lines where added as a details of a problem that need to be sorted.
- it is a word in a circle... don't talk pish, there is no concept.********
- i personally like the lines.Glitterati_Duane
- is this a uk based company by the way? they could do with picking a word that is easier to say.********
- it is a word in a circle... don't talk pish, there is no concept.
- ********0
- RIP!!********
- hahajamble
- HAHAHAHASpookytim
- nice typeGlitterati_Duane
- I want that as a pin badge!FallowDeer
- SPEAKING FOR YOURSELF********
- yes, i was utopian, that is my own personal logo.********
- i like the typographical work on that, as well. and you could probably make some money off of badges.ender79
- RIP!!
- kelpie0
forget faxing, think of all the spend on ink through a year with them. then think of the trees, the poor trees and shit
- Spookytim0
"The Lines where added as a details of a problem that need to be sorted"
Its not the job of a logo to tell a multifaceted story of derring-do. Nobody would ever in a million years look at those lines and say "I think they depict the idea of detials of problems being sorted"
Stick a nice typeface in a circle.
- hahahaha! Excellent point, also fantastic use of 'derring-do'...ian
- chossy0
It looks like a button badge for an asian rap band, do more work dust mine, think how you can link IT into the logo. I honestly think you have not really thought about this much you have just done somethign which was popular a couple of years ago.
- uncle_helv0
stop trying to make things that look cool and stylised Dust!
- Alternatively stop posting stuff on here, as it's usually pretty weak or painfully naive! :)uncle_helv
- ouch!********
- ********0
tell the client that uncle...
they asked for something cool and modern in my style.
what shall i do add a clipart computer?
- haha, you do have a special way of getting on with people rybo.********
- just use different clip art to what you've used on this.jamble
- haha, you do have a special way of getting on with people rybo.
- ian0
Also Dust, not sure what you mean by your concept description, 'The concept i came up with a conversation with the client they are the solution to a problem instantly, trying to fit a square into a circle came to mind.'
Trying to fit a square peg in a round hole means trying to shoehorn something where it won't go, this doesn't mean the right solution to the problem, it means forcing it. So basing a logo on this may not be the best solution, should it be a round peg in a round hole? Somethign that it the right fit for the job, maybe theres something in that. or not, just a suggestion.
- Spookytim0
Considering you're asking, and getting, help from lots of people here gratis, you're a bit of a sarky fucker aren't you Rybo?
- you spelt cock face wrong.********
- he doesn't want a crit, he wants praisekelpie
- You're right...Spookytim
- hahahahaian
- "you're a bit of a sarky fucker aren't you Cock Face?"Spookytim
- Spot on kelpie!uncle_helv
- you spelt cock face wrong.
- phatlee0
The logo on the business card looks far too close to the edge. It would be good to see more other than just diagonal lines though.
- detritus0
Rybo - identity crisis
- The Summer's Sleeper Cinema Hit!detritus
- Hahahahahaha!uncle_helv
- gets popcorn in anticipation...ian
- tank020
Why do you post stuff here, if you are not willing to listnen to advice?
- ian0
Is this going to be another one of rybo/dusts threads that hits the 180 mark by the end of the day?
- I was just thinking that ian!uncle_helv
- *rolls up sleeves*
Only one way to find out.
*logs out*detritus