Identity Crit - rybo
Identity Crit - rybo
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- Spookytim0
Personally I think you've got a bit too much going on. Delete the reversed letterhead. It has no relevance and confuses the issue.
Too many angles... Sriran at an angle, with chevrons/lines at another angle.
Don't like the cyan type on the BC. Also on the BC I would make a decision to either bring the circle comfortbly inside the trim, or definitely cropping off the trim, but most printers will fuck up trying to trim the card exactly where the edge of the circle is. Just my humble opinion, but I wouldn't bother.
I think the logo has promise, but maybe you're trying to add visual interest with the cutline on the S and n, and maybe the job would be cleaner with the type in a circle and no fannying about.
- The black is too heavy too. Simplify, SIMPLIFY.Spookytim