Identity Crit - rybo
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- Dancer0
• what does the name mean?
• letterhead needs work on the margins/line length
• You will never get that text reversed out of black to work ever – you should know that
• the angle of the logo is too slight and almost looks like an error
• looks "trendy" and will date very quicklywhat are you other routes/concepts... if you have any?
- chossy0
Off the top my head, dust mine why not have all the text made from the wire of a mouse and the last letter the n be the mouse. This would be a nice little logo if drawn in your cool modern style. Basically what I am trying to say is think a little more about the logo and how unique it could look, I know my mouse idea seems contrived and obviouse but it is far better than text in a circle, and the execution of the mouse and wire could be lovely.
- ********0
Make circle > Type 'Sriran' in stolen Avant Garde typeface > Tilt 10°
What cunt is paying you....
- Sriran commissioned the identity, he's paying for it with his birthday money.Spookytim
- does not compute********
- ********0
its not advice, its down right abuse. 'no talent cunt'
i listen to people like:
Fariska
BaskerviIle
Spookytim
ianThe rest are just stupid comments
- You've nailed it!uncle_helv
- the no talent cunt was not made for you or directed at you. although it could easily have been********
- no talent cunt is one of my websites rybo... that is the logo for it.
http://www.notalentc…******** - ha ha ha ha you forgot to tilt it.chossy
- tank020
You brought the abuse on yourself man...
- How?********
- You don't listen, it's naive to always think you are right!uncle_helv
- How?
- ********0
everytime i post it seems to be the chance for all the dickheads to come out and have a dig.
- Trust me on this: It SEEMS that way, but you're mistaken. I know.Spookytim
- Dancer0
fuck you then.
- kelpie0
your problem is the attitude you take on here; you need to learn some humility and that there is a difference between putting across a reasoned argument to stand up for you work and simply postng online and ignoring the comments of the people you've asked for help.
All people are saying is to try to marry your visual style with some kind of solid conceptual thinking. Its useless making something look "cool" if there is nothing deeper going on there.
Everyone does this when they're starting out, its nothing overly bad; it just looks that way when you then come across as an arsey wee upstart who never listens
- Glitterati_Duane0
Hey if they didn't care they'd let you make stuff they didn't like and not say shit.
- phatlee0
- Your a Fucking Idiot!********
- hehehe where did you find that!uncle_helv
- Yeah, but you get a rosette so.... COME ON!!!!!!!!Spookytim
- Maybe, but Phatlee his work is solid gold.tank02
- Your a Fucking Idiot!
- ********0
i do listen though just dont take kindly to dogs abuse from all of QBN
- chossy0
Next thing you know with an attitude like that you will end up a total mong chode like skt.
- only doing work for competetions********
- my day job is making generic flash sites for the film industry rybo, i do competitions like that to keep me sane.********
- you have no idea mate, every time you say that it makes you look even more a fannykelpie
- sh sh sh shhhh.chossy
- <@rybo!kelpie
- that sh sh sh shhh is for dust mine.chossy
- only doing work for competetions
- Khurram0
Yes, that is very good... but you're no Phil Johns i'll tell you that.
- ********0
lmao!
- Spookytim0
If you look back over the thread Rybo. you asked for critical appraisal and you got it. You then reacted badly to Skt's comment that he has yet to see you do soemthing without diagonals. You took that personally, but really all he said was he is yet to see you do soemthing without diagonals. He is also yet to see you do something with polish lace but I doubt you'd have got upset if he mentioned it.
You then had a bit of a jab at him, and from that point on, naturally, you lose the respect and the support of the forum and we all pile in and have a right old laugh ripping the piss.
Which is also good.
- ********0
Phatlee whats this solid gold work?
- it is nice clean corporate work for the 3rd biggest bank in europe. you really have no idea, do you.********
- wheres the thinking, where is the concept********
- You have no fuckin' chance Dust you moron, when you grow up you will learn, hopefully!!!uncle_helv
- you need to fuck off now rybo********
- Aww, cheers fellas. Dust_Mine you really don't have a clue.phatlee
- Make circle > Type a work > Done********
- I hope one day I interview you for a job...phatlee
- You arrogant little twat...
by seeing these pages here you already see a concept in the photos...tank02 - You just wanna lash out at the first circle concept you see...tank02
- dust_mine, are you working as a designer or a student?airey
- it is nice clean corporate work for the 3rd biggest bank in europe. you really have no idea, do you.
- ********0
Im only giving as good as im getting?
- hahahahahakelpie
- the design industry is a small world rybo... i would log off now, change all your url's and shut the fuck up.********
- You a are a childish clueless moron, as we all once were, but you are currently so its your turn to get cunted off********
- lol @ skt********
- Hahaha... is this a piss take?phatlee
- kelpie0
- to review or analyze critically.....about 3 people did that.********
- to review or analyze critically.....about 3 people did that.
- tank020
Oh man...