Logo Crit - Happy Food
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- dMullins0
I think of these, #4 is the best, but I don't think #4 is the final selection.
If I were the client, I would ask to see a lot of options for this brand's logo exploration, instead of 1 or 2 of your "best recommendations."
I don't personally believe that any of the 4 are working toward a final executable, and would work on more varieties.
- d_rek0
All good feedback - thanks to everyone so far!
@dMullins,
There's much more on my canvas - i'm just trying to pair it to down as to make my life a little easier. That being said client is only paying to develop a couple of concepts initially. I'd prefer not to inundate them with too many options as previous experience with that approach has been painful: (ie: "take qualities of logos A+B+C and put them into Logo F").I am working on hashing out more ideas but just wanted to get some feedback for my top contenders at this point.
Again, thanks for all the feedback!
- dMullins0
If I were you, I would rather have a final piece that hits the mark with consumers, than 1 of 4 designs I pulled from my canvas of options.
That said, #4 is still the best of the 4, IMO.
- OSFA0
#4 fo' sho.
- 4...ideaist
- ...shoideaist
- she was a hoe. Fooooo Shooooooobrandon_phillip
- utopian0
#4 FO-SU
- iceberg0
4 works for me. while the "mouth/smile" seems a bit alien still - I'd probably work on that and see if it can go more along the lines of the other letters.
- dbloc0
#4 is gold
- hellojeehae0
4 works for me :)
- gabe0
#4 is great indeed, but i'm confident i've seen something nearly identical before. will try and dig it up...
- RoyBoyII0
4 all the way .....
- d_rek0
dbloc / gabe,
I thought the same thing but I couldn't really find anything inside of the food industry (organic, mass-produced, or otherwise) that was similar. I did think of the amazon logo too. But... it was such a no-brainer I couldn't *not* do it. O_O
- whatsup0
#2- Totally... Those other logos are just way to cornballish and goofy. Save that shizz for MTV.
- Amicus0
Concept for #3 and 4 is great, but I think the type could be even better. It could look happier with subtle rounded corners, a little less condensed and a little bolder.
at the moment it looks like you are trying to squeeze all the happy out... :(
This is an awesome job to win – if the clients don't kill it!
- luckyorphan0
I like the concept of #1, but I'm not sure the execution is working.
#4 is good, but I had the same reaction, in thinking of amazon. But I'm not sure that's a bad thing. You've made it it's own thing, and it works in the market for which it's intended.
All that said, it might be good to see another approach. Have you considered something iconic or even character-based? Just tossing it out there.
- chuparosa0
4 but maybe stack it and lock it up.....