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- dMullins0
Wow, at $50 a client, you must be a gazillionaire by now.
- rouncey0
OK...thank you calcio and Mullin for some valid criticism, and some actual design criticism finally. Some fair point which I will consider.
To the haters, I would just like to point out that I am avereging 2-3 new client a week, which is more than most of you judging by the number of threads I see on here about people lost or losing their job. Something to keep in mind:)
PEACE,
rouncey
- more power to yamagnificent_ruin
- so $50-$150 per client x 3?
you must be RICH!!lvl_13
- dMullins0
I would fix your typos before even thinking about any design changes or modifications.
"Banners Ads."
"Corporate Stationery."
"eCommerce" instead of "Online Stores."
In the footer (which is on every single sub-page) you have "Wed Design Leeds," instead of "Web Design Leeds" – I imagine that's horrible for your SEO... There are tons of grammatical and typographic errors in your site's copy, on every single page.
Lastly, I would do some reorganization or your "Contact Us" page's hierarchy. It's hard to read, and I'm pretty sure in Leeds that people read left-to-right, and not right-to-left. Also, you have four typos and grammar errors on your "Contact Us" page.
As far as design, the kerning on your logo needs work, and I agree with a lot of what's already been stated.
- calcio0
Rouncy, some constructive remarks.
first, you are a design agency, so make sure that you have something to show. Get rid of most of the copy, it is pointless cliched dribble and no one will read it. Give your work the spotlight instead of the bla bla.
The design itself is unremarkable and bland. Sure, you want to communicate the 'bargain' prices, but there is a big difference between cheap and lousy design. Instead of this basic mid nineties Geocities approach, make a well designed online 'spoof' on a sales folder for example... make it great and interactive, tong in cheeque, but at the same time communicating your USP's and radiating that you know what you are doing (which now is clearly lacking in your design).
In any case, make sure that people don't need to go so deep in the site for examples. Prospects don't come for marketing blatter but for examples and proof that you are able to meet their needs/solve their design problems.
Goodluck.
- boobs0
Be brutal
- ukit0
Well, that went well
- ukit0
- digdre0
The world would be boring without pervs.
- digdre0
the kid must have a big penis for his age.. thinking of the cameltoe i was wondering how 'it' actually got in there.
- digdre0
big boobs for a 15YO
- No wonder she got knocked upabettertomorrow
- he should of just given her a pearl necklace.Jnr_Madison
- *should have
my fuck.Jnr_Madison - She looks like a Bag ladyroundabout
- lukusW0
I think one of the biggest problems is that you use tables for layout.
- liveforever0
atleast Leeds won today OH THEY DIDNT.......... fuckin lol
- rouncey0
opinions are like arseholes
everyone's got one:)
- Come on, bro... you tell people to be 'brutal', and after a few comments you act like Chris Crocker.NotByHand
- Have you ever been in the PVN before? You actually got very cordial feedback...NotByHand
- LOLabettertomorrow
- Nairn0
Needs felt.