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Rouncy, some constructive remarks.
first, you are a design agency, so make sure that you have something to show. Get rid of most of the copy, it is pointless cliched dribble and no one will read it. Give your work the spotlight instead of the bla bla.
The design itself is unremarkable and bland. Sure, you want to communicate the 'bargain' prices, but there is a big difference between cheap and lousy design. Instead of this basic mid nineties Geocities approach, make a well designed online 'spoof' on a sales folder for example... make it great and interactive, tong in cheeque, but at the same time communicating your USP's and radiating that you know what you are doing (which now is clearly lacking in your design).
In any case, make sure that people don't need to go so deep in the site for examples. Prospects don't come for marketing blatter but for examples and proof that you are able to meet their needs/solve their design problems.
Goodluck.