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- rouncey
Hello! wonder what you thought of this site I launched. i am perfectionist, so be as brutal as you like.
- meffid0
QBN looks great.
- mg330
I'd consider becoming a firefighter.
- juhls0
aw, I was hoping you were fouty.
- Jnr_Madison0
I have a 90" widescreen monitor and I have to turn my head almost 90° to the left to view it.
- but seriously, the colour palate makes it look a bit washed out.Jnr_Madison
- VectorMasked0
The text you have on the images is a bit cheesy. "Print design", "3d design", etc... and why move this text around? at least keep it in the same place (ie left bottom corner).
...and... it's also kinda cheesy to have "flash", "banner ads", "online stores" etc... arranged that way.
Add a space after the copyright symbol and make that dash an "en" dash in the footer.
You misspelled the work "initial" and you need to add a comma before "etc" in the Print blurb
Make the hyphens, "en" dashes.
- VectorMasked0
and what's with the animated logo in your portfolio section?
- rouncey0
what's with it? hmmm, well..It's an animated logo? Don't you think the client should be able to see the animation?
also. you say its cheesy to label the sections. Maybe if you knew something about SEO and usability you would understand that the site needs to be divided into useful sections.
- VectorMasked0
So you want to get people to critic your site and you get defensive like that? Nice.
The animated logo is slightly pointless and distracting. Does it mean you suck? No at all.
Labeling sections is not bad or cheesy. It's basic. But the way those keywords are arranged and presented do not add much visually.
And hey, in your "Corporate Identity / Logo Design" section get rid of one of the periods after the word "Plus". And add a comma again before "etc" in that same page.
;oP
- bulletfactory0
Bespoke websites - £150 template design then £10 per page.
Logo Design - £50
Forums - from £10
Hosting - £15 p.a.
Online Stores - from £100
- Jnr_Madison0
Bespoke and template in the same sentence?
- skt0
link clouds, or whatever the fuck you call them have to be one of the ugliest things ever invented.
- Jnr_Madison0
Also, some very basic SEO stuff missing, which is weird as you come across like you really know about SEO.
- _salisae_0
i'm curious what exactly it is you're a perfectionist about
- jiaf0
Wackity-Shmackity Doooo!
http://validator.w3.org/check?ur…
- _salisae_0
it's difficult to give a proper critique, rouncey. what is your objective? your prices are very low so maybe this is the perfect fit for you?
the biggest issue i have with it is there is no hierarchy and i have to dig to see your work and by the time i get there i already feel let down.