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  • VectorMasked0

    The text you have on the images is a bit cheesy. "Print design", "3d design", etc... and why move this text around? at least keep it in the same place (ie left bottom corner).

    ...and... it's also kinda cheesy to have "flash", "banner ads", "online stores" etc... arranged that way.

    Add a space after the copyright symbol and make that dash an "en" dash in the footer.

    You misspelled the work "initial" and you need to add a comma before "etc" in the Print blurb

    Make the hyphens, "en" dashes.

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