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- ukit0
^Yes, exactly. Wouldn't worry about the details until your message makes sense.
- brandelec0
not sure about the text. almost engrish like?
- hallelujah0
how does a definition of the word "new" promote you?
- rybo0
Thank You Chossy.
I was aiming for system overload so if its not working i will change it, i will work on 'NEW' so i get it looking quiet nice hehe, i did try and keep it consistant as the i used the N reflected to then added the accender of the W.
and i will re draw the lines
Thank You again
- laahshi0
what if the word "new" was the same colour fill as the background?
- chossy0
hmm the composition is a bit of a mess really.
society47 sticks out like teets on a boar, the description text of what new is over rides the new graphic which is what I assume you want to hightlight by creating a sweet graphic to say the word new, so the description text totally detracts from it. the text new is not very nice because it is like three different fonts, try to use a similar style to the e in new for the rest of the letters as this might be quite nice, also the waves in the back ground seem too simple too easy to do embellish them more add to them make them more complex spend a bit more time making it look like an art.
- ukit0
Bad design, fonts don't match, but beyond that it doesn't even make sense. Get rid of the "New" font and the text and think of a better way to say what you want to say.
- laahshi0
that wavy line in the background, is that from illustrator templates?
- rybo0
- tank020
Please read this:
http://www.amazon.com/Elements-T…
than try again.- Excellent book. Its full of useful info, not just a 'oh thats pretty' lookbook.ian
- http://webtypography…Anders
- laahshi0
can we see a higher res image?