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Out of context: Reply #8

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  • chossy0

    hmm the composition is a bit of a mess really.

    society47 sticks out like teets on a boar, the description text of what new is over rides the new graphic which is what I assume you want to hightlight by creating a sweet graphic to say the word new, so the description text totally detracts from it. the text new is not very nice because it is like three different fonts, try to use a similar style to the e in new for the rest of the letters as this might be quite nice, also the waves in the back ground seem too simple too easy to do embellish them more add to them make them more complex spend a bit more time making it look like an art.

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