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- JKilla770
Haha Chad's good, he just moved back, started over at Blue Castle as an art lead or w/e. He's living in Yaletown right now with his two Chihuahuas.....
- canuck0
Nice work; usability of the site isn't too great. Nav is slow, and a bit of a pain to keep track of things.
- SoulFly0
Do you really have to list the Creative Director?
I think you give thanks and give credits to people and almost makes it seem like you have limited skills.
You must have samples of work you did from concept to production, even if the pieces aren't that amazing. The first thing clients will ask for is to see designs you did on your own.- I listed everyone that was involved in the project, even if it was direction from the CD.lobstarr
- jevad0
"almost everyones here hates flash"
Sweeping statement of the year.
I think you will find that when it has been used properly and appropriately, it will be appreciated accordingly.
- example?Mishga
- http://www.zombo.com…jevad
- http://www.socket-st…neue75_bold
- http://www.group94.c…neue75_bold
- holy shite, that uplay website did, i dont know how the streamed the video so well...lobstarr
- zoombo is nice...like the colours...that group94 site sucks..Mishga
- mishga, you wouldn't know a good design if it shat on your chest...neue75_bold
- hey – neue75_bold, obviously sarcasm shat on your chest and you didn't notice...Mishga
- Mishga0
Hey Lobstarr!
Nice flash skills, love your site. Like some good people said you need to work that type..
Don't bother posting your flash work here, almost everyones here hates flash, and says "you could do the same with html and JS".
Your work is very good indeed..
Cheers!=)- I like flash, I just don't like the design... see group94 for great flash and great design...neue75_bold
- jfletcher0
I like what you're doing, but overall make it simpler. I'd take out half the work. You have a ton in there.... if you took out half and left the top pieces it could make you look even stronger.
There are some obnoxious interactions like when I hit portfolio 06-08 I *have to make a choice and can't just return to the page.
the work and the site feel very different... but that might not be bad.
Regardless, it's a good step, needs some refinement.
- make your opening statement on your resume a little shorter too :)jfletcher
- neue75_bold0
How do you pronounce your last name?
- srsly?jevad
- "ing" , like a verb, reason to name my son "Fuck" when i have children..lobstarr
- wtf? that is not how you say it at all. Thing Hung - minus the Hu.jevad
- it was serious, I've never known.. thanks lobstarr, now go tell MrRemote I said 'hi'... ;)neue75_bold
- am i missing something here? whois mr remote???lobstarr
- i look like a deer in headlights right nowlobstarr
- forcetwelve0
the background scene/image doesn't suit your style. make it simpler.
- Dancer0
Nightmare to navigate.
How do I get back to the front page.When I click Portfolio 06-08 – How do I get out of that screen again.
My experience was not fun and I clicked away without seeing any work.
Sorry.
p.s Make it html
- slater0
There seem to be some vowels missing in your last name. Might wanna fix that!
:D
- SoulFly0
The resume button doesn't work, what da heck is going on??
- jevad0
Handwriting font is terrible - and deer ffs? The work is class. You need something that reflects your clean style - not a portfolio that looks like a WoW fan site...
- doctor0
Use greater line-height for the intro text on the frontpage, and maybe reconsider the all caps thingy. It's not very legible. Same goes for the portfolio font, so drop it.
You have some navigation issues...
1) I miss a link back to the frontpage (you could make the logo clickable).
2) I also miss a link from the frontpage to your complete portfolio. It sucks having to click a recent project, in order to click forth to "portfolio 06-08", to see the whole list.
3) It took me a while to find the "Next" button. I would either move it or make it stand out more.Really nice work. Your site should reflect your style more.
- VectorMasked0
Funny.
Don't like the site, but do like the work. The quality of it doesn't match the quality of the work.
- Gucci0
i'm with everyone else. the handwriting font is a no.
I also find it hard to read the all caps serif on the lefthand side, just my opinion.
- moamoa0
to much schnick schnack.
- lobstarr0
Thanks for all the feedback guys..
- utopian10
kill that font > before we kill you
BTW - Nice work