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- PIITB0
also when I click on your CV I get an error.
http://www.keithng.ca/beta/Keith…- oh right cv/resume not up yet... good thing i havent sent this in to anyone yet..lobstarr
- JKilla770
Haha Chad's good, he just moved back, started over at Blue Castle as an art lead or w/e. He's living in Yaletown right now with his two Chihuahuas.....
- PIITB0
splash page loads slow, I get a black screen for 5 seconds before anything even happens.
- tank020
drop that font, really..
- moamoa0
to much schnick schnack.
- utopian10
kill that font > before we kill you
BTW - Nice work
- Gucci0
i'm with everyone else. the handwriting font is a no.
I also find it hard to read the all caps serif on the lefthand side, just my opinion.
- jevad0
Handwriting font is terrible - and deer ffs? The work is class. You need something that reflects your clean style - not a portfolio that looks like a WoW fan site...
- SoulFly0
The resume button doesn't work, what da heck is going on??
- VectorMasked0
Funny.
Don't like the site, but do like the work. The quality of it doesn't match the quality of the work.
- doctor0
Use greater line-height for the intro text on the frontpage, and maybe reconsider the all caps thingy. It's not very legible. Same goes for the portfolio font, so drop it.
You have some navigation issues...
1) I miss a link back to the frontpage (you could make the logo clickable).
2) I also miss a link from the frontpage to your complete portfolio. It sucks having to click a recent project, in order to click forth to "portfolio 06-08", to see the whole list.
3) It took me a while to find the "Next" button. I would either move it or make it stand out more.Really nice work. Your site should reflect your style more.
- SoulFly0
Do you really have to list the Creative Director?
I think you give thanks and give credits to people and almost makes it seem like you have limited skills.
You must have samples of work you did from concept to production, even if the pieces aren't that amazing. The first thing clients will ask for is to see designs you did on your own.- I listed everyone that was involved in the project, even if it was direction from the CD.lobstarr
- canuck0
Nice work; usability of the site isn't too great. Nav is slow, and a bit of a pain to keep track of things.
- lobstarr0
Thanks for all the feedback guys..
- slater0
There seem to be some vowels missing in your last name. Might wanna fix that!
:D
- Dancer0
Nightmare to navigate.
How do I get back to the front page.When I click Portfolio 06-08 – How do I get out of that screen again.
My experience was not fun and I clicked away without seeing any work.
Sorry.
p.s Make it html
- forcetwelve0
the background scene/image doesn't suit your style. make it simpler.
- neue75_bold0
How do you pronounce your last name?
- srsly?jevad
- "ing" , like a verb, reason to name my son "Fuck" when i have children..lobstarr
- wtf? that is not how you say it at all. Thing Hung - minus the Hu.jevad
- it was serious, I've never known.. thanks lobstarr, now go tell MrRemote I said 'hi'... ;)neue75_bold
- am i missing something here? whois mr remote???lobstarr
- i look like a deer in headlights right nowlobstarr