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- lobstarr
Currently not liking the fonts/ -- might change it...
- lobstarr0
oh and rape me.
- Jaline0
Don't really like the font used for the list of work.
- Jaline0
Not bad though. Instead of the "Portfolio 06-08", maybe a "back" or "previous" title is better. Or just "portfolio". And the rollover effect isn't really necessary.
- MrRemote0
You spelt Guinness wrong.
- ukit0
At first glance your work is much better than your site.
Absolutely kill the handwriting font - it close to Comic Sans. I'd go with the serif for everything.
The rainbow bg is just overkill - I'd desaturate the bg image and darken it to put the focus on the content.
Also the animation looks like it needs some work.
- With regards to the animation, do you just mean better or totally different transitions?lobstarr
- uncle_helv0
Agree with Jaline, that font is pug fugly!
- Jaline0
Make it more simple. You don't need all the random flash effects for transitions.
- Iggyboo0
Well to me it looks like your an interactive with limited typographic treatment. So yes your site needs a new typeface and maybe a bit of work on the logo. But the site loads well and looks nice as a site itself.
- Either that or work with a graphic designer to help you finish your site. I mean you are more of a developer?Iggyboo
- designer/developer/j... AD -- very very jr... ive only been in advertising for two years.. and then the one year out of EA in vancouverlobstarr
- vancouverlobstarr
- Well you do good work, best of luck with the site.Iggyboo
- thanks man, appreciate the feedback ...lobstarr
- PIITB0
change your fonts, but you already know that.
Also how do you get back to the main page after you clicked on a project?
- PIITB0
also when I click on your CV I get an error.
http://www.keithng.ca/beta/Keith…- oh right cv/resume not up yet... good thing i havent sent this in to anyone yet..lobstarr
- PIITB0
splash page loads slow, I get a black screen for 5 seconds before anything even happens.
- tank020
drop that font, really..
- utopian10
kill that font > before we kill you
BTW - Nice work
- lobstarr0
Thanks for all the feedback guys..
- moamoa0
to much schnick schnack.
- Gucci0
i'm with everyone else. the handwriting font is a no.
I also find it hard to read the all caps serif on the lefthand side, just my opinion.
- VectorMasked0
Funny.
Don't like the site, but do like the work. The quality of it doesn't match the quality of the work.
- doctor0
Use greater line-height for the intro text on the frontpage, and maybe reconsider the all caps thingy. It's not very legible. Same goes for the portfolio font, so drop it.
You have some navigation issues...
1) I miss a link back to the frontpage (you could make the logo clickable).
2) I also miss a link from the frontpage to your complete portfolio. It sucks having to click a recent project, in order to click forth to "portfolio 06-08", to see the whole list.
3) It took me a while to find the "Next" button. I would either move it or make it stand out more.Really nice work. Your site should reflect your style more.
- jevad0
Handwriting font is terrible - and deer ffs? The work is class. You need something that reflects your clean style - not a portfolio that looks like a WoW fan site...