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- pauliusuza0
About the mask: when launched Omnitar will also provide 3D avatars (on top of the AI engine) so while the mask does not make much sense now it sort of fits the later stage of the company.
- but if anyone has a suggestion of another object instead, now is the timepauliusuza
- dbloc0
with the face logo and the cartoony type style is doesn't say smarter to me...
- wordssssss0
don't do handwritten if you can't do handwritten
- duhsign0
< not a fan
- dijitaq0
when i first opened it i thought that you had redesigned b.e.h.a.n.c.e, then i was like ooooo....
- duhsign0
I would lose all scribbles. I like the gradient thing behind the logo slide, maybe just go with that for the web background maybe in a really light grey. I'm not a fan of the mask either, eye looks kind of alien, if you can I would just simplify it more and think more digital, less curves, simpler. you have some stuff that is working thugh, just need to tighten it up and make it smart.
- I think maybe the 3d/gradient in the mask is overkill, jlook at solid colorduhsign
- thankspauliusuza
- pauliusuza0
Thanks
- akrokdesign0
great if it was a skate apps.
who's your audience and target?
- called "hold ya mask". lol.akrokdesign
- nerds mostly and investors with heavy IT backgroundpauliusuza
- pauliusuza0
if anybody got a b.e.h.a.n.c.e profile, add me to your circle
- Milan0
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- OnlyUseful0
phantom nothing new hear
- -kappa-0
love your inruntime stuff!
- Nairn0
It would've looked better had you made it on a PC.
- wha?set
- http://www.qbn.com/t…Nairn
- Whoops, totally wrong login.Nairn
- Horp0
I have feedback....
I didn't click your link. This is because I find your general demeanor to be suspect and a little bit sinister. Try a more friendly approach, provide some information to give us some perspective to work from, then we wont suspect we're about to see three tubby elderly men shagging each other in the shower when we click.
- akrokdesign0
It would've looked much better had you made it on a Amiga 500.
- pauliusuza0
Horp, sorry about that. Here's some perspective: the client is Omnitar Inc. an Artificial Intelligence startup, they have this cool new API that will become self aware and rule the planet.
I made the logo and a microsite for investors (they are looking for VC funds).
- spec?Mojo
- Ask yourself..."What would SkyNet do?"ETM
- It's like a 7 year old, can follow a line of thought, understands input, and learns darn fast...pauliusuza
- abettertomorrow0
What's up with the scribbly thing in top right? That and the background make it look like its aimed at kids or something
- it was all done in 24 hours including the back-end, so had to sacrifice the shiny style for doodles.pauliusuza
- Maybe more minimal would work though? Just drop the background graphics, will look better IMOabettertomorrow
- white bg looks good on smaller screens, not so good on larger onespauliusuza
- the scribble look does not seem appropriate for something as advanced as AI to meyeeblazer
- abettertomorrow0
I would get rid of the background scribbles and the grey 3D "edges" in the featured area.