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- wagshaft0
omnitard
- the name. not your logo.wagshaft
- it's from latin omnibus+avatarpauliusuza
- -kappa-0
love your inruntime stuff!
- OnlyUseful0
phantom nothing new hear
- Milan0
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- pauliusuza0
if anybody got a b.e.h.a.n.c.e profile, add me to your circle
- akrokdesign0
great if it was a skate apps.
who's your audience and target?
- called "hold ya mask". lol.akrokdesign
- nerds mostly and investors with heavy IT backgroundpauliusuza
- pauliusuza0
Thanks
- duhsign0
I would lose all scribbles. I like the gradient thing behind the logo slide, maybe just go with that for the web background maybe in a really light grey. I'm not a fan of the mask either, eye looks kind of alien, if you can I would just simplify it more and think more digital, less curves, simpler. you have some stuff that is working thugh, just need to tighten it up and make it smart.
- I think maybe the 3d/gradient in the mask is overkill, jlook at solid colorduhsign
- thankspauliusuza
- dijitaq0
when i first opened it i thought that you had redesigned b.e.h.a.n.c.e, then i was like ooooo....
- duhsign0
< not a fan
- wordssssss0
don't do handwritten if you can't do handwritten
- dbloc0
with the face logo and the cartoony type style is doesn't say smarter to me...
- pauliusuza0
About the mask: when launched Omnitar will also provide 3D avatars (on top of the AI engine) so while the mask does not make much sense now it sort of fits the later stage of the company.
- but if anyone has a suggestion of another object instead, now is the timepauliusuza
- kona0
not bad but a couple of things...
- the mask in the logo to me diminishes the product and just isn't working. i'd remove the mask if you can and think of another object to put in it's place
- focus on your grid by removing the two gray boxes flanking the hero, increase the size of the hero to the full width of the content below, then, put that content into a while container and give the content a nice margin. as it stands the content looks odd just floating around like that. it needs to be grounded
- also. i'd work on the i.a. you basically have 6 sections all competing against each other. try and break it down into 3 main secondary sections, then 3 sub-sections with strong ctas (Availability? / Learn more / Investors) with a small blurb for each, nothing more than a sentence or two. They need to be instantly digestible right.
- i like the hand drawn art, maybe incorporate some of that by sprinkling more as icons for the 3 main sections (What is Omnitar? / Who's it for? / How much).
keep pushing. nice start dude.
- desmo0
The background pattern feels distracting and the way you have your body copy blocked out may get irritating after a while.
- sorry, what do you mean by "body copy blocked out "pauliusuza
- duckseason0
Feel the logo and site design clash a bit.
The BG and the illustration in the upper right are what's causing it - they look more targeted to Nickelodeon than investors for a startup AI biz.- would changing the doodle with similar hitech / 3d render / glossy stuff work?pauliusuza
- utopian0
what kind of mask is that?
- Theatre mask. The one actor has to hold during the performancepauliusuza
- utopian0
Why don't you integrate the mask into part of the "O" and simplify the mask into B/W art work, eliminating the 1999, 3D bevels and drop shadow effects...
- Um, tried that, but the instantaneous association on view was A instead of O.pauliusuza
- pauliusuza0
No, more like this:
- Damn, I was hoping this was some Stakka and Skynet...dMullins