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- pauliusuza0
thanks
- mrghost0
the white box around all the text is a little strange but I like it.
- abettertomorrow0
I would get rid of the background scribbles and the grey 3D "edges" in the featured area.
- abettertomorrow0
What's up with the scribbly thing in top right? That and the background make it look like its aimed at kids or something
- it was all done in 24 hours including the back-end, so had to sacrifice the shiny style for doodles.pauliusuza
- Maybe more minimal would work though? Just drop the background graphics, will look better IMOabettertomorrow
- white bg looks good on smaller screens, not so good on larger onespauliusuza
- the scribble look does not seem appropriate for something as advanced as AI to meyeeblazer
- pauliusuza0
Horp, sorry about that. Here's some perspective: the client is Omnitar Inc. an Artificial Intelligence startup, they have this cool new API that will become self aware and rule the planet.
I made the logo and a microsite for investors (they are looking for VC funds).
- spec?Mojo
- Ask yourself..."What would SkyNet do?"ETM
- It's like a 7 year old, can follow a line of thought, understands input, and learns darn fast...pauliusuza
- akrokdesign0
It would've looked much better had you made it on a Amiga 500.
- Horp0
I have feedback....
I didn't click your link. This is because I find your general demeanor to be suspect and a little bit sinister. Try a more friendly approach, provide some information to give us some perspective to work from, then we wont suspect we're about to see three tubby elderly men shagging each other in the shower when we click.
- Nairn0
It would've looked better had you made it on a PC.
- wha?set
- http://www.qbn.com/t…Nairn
- Whoops, totally wrong login.Nairn
- pauliusuza
Got a weird feeling that something could be improved. Any feedback?