another logo crit
another logo crit
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- instil_design0
- bigger better?instil_design
- I'd say yes. But the placement of superstore still feels kind of half hearted.ukit
- not quite sure what to do with the superstore bit yetinstil_design
- center it in this case.Antonelli
- don't worry, its not a cop-out. imagine it in signage.Antonelli
- by the way, i think you could push a concept a little bit. you're not even trying FFS.Antonelli
- its a TOY store. have some fun with it. people would kill for a client like that.Antonelli
- thats what im doing behind the scenes :)instil_design
- instil_design0
- getting there... the middle one with the windmill (whatever they are called) mark is quite nice.skt
- thanks yeah i think it is just called a windmill toy lol :)instil_design
- added the rocket one now too :) swooosh lolinstil_design
- i think it's called a pinwheelbulletfactory
- janne760
why don't you try some wiggling with the letters?
kids don't give a damn about proper kerning and alignment... still too clean and not too playful imho...
- the client wants it clean and modern. i did some playfull stuff with the type, they wasnt into itinstil_design
- ah i see.. why don't i get those clients, eh?janne76
- haha :) i did a lot of research into kids toy logos and stuff and he didnt wanna blend in :)instil_design
- d_rek0
Heavier is better, I like the idea of the identity being dynamic (ie: the shape/face changing in the O constantly). It will give you a lot of room to 'play'.
Have you tried rounding out the corners to soften up the wordmark a bit? It may give it that playful demeanor the word 'toyshop' is asking for.
- instil_design0
Just had a update with the client he is like the one with the rockets the best, especially the one with it underneath lol
- tho he did say he wud go with what gets the gets feedback which is good lolinstil_design
- FallowDeer0
that rocket well reminds me of button moon
- spendogg0
the pinwheel is a winner
- instil_design0
- nice!kona
- Oh man...I like it now except for the twirly thing which feels slapped on for no reasonukit
- nice touch with the pin wheel
not 100% on the colour but good direction to take.WeLoveNoise - I liked the rocket.FredMcWoozy
- nice, colour order could have been better consideredraskolnikov
- The colour order is very specific to the branding based on kids nursery ryhme :)instil_design
- typist0
- give the guy a break it's a kids windmill http://www.stamfordr…raskolnikov