another logo crit
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- camer0
what's it for?
- surface0
the "e" in superstore shouldn't actually hit the implied lien set by the "p".. it sets the illusion that the word "superstore" branches a bit too right. unless you wanted that feel
- j1983m0
The word 'superstore' doesn't sit right at the bottom. It looks very unbalanced, maybe try it in caps too.
Also i look at TOYSHOP and all i see is the TOPSHOP type!!!
- Orbit0
I know its really not great design in the purist sense to do this, but I think you need to add some kind of appealing quirk to this. Aside from the colours, its quite austere looking for kids. I'm not talking about a daft pink gorilla stealing the P or anything, but something... a tiny little piece of magic that kids will love.
- rkrd0
Is it a store for adults? The type could be more playful, not wacky or something, just a bit friendlier. And the tagline is not in its place.
- mydo0
i'm hoping for something in the white space here. something that makes me go, oh that's clever. like the guy with the boner between the S and the H.
- instil_design0
The store is for adults and kids will sell toys/consoles/ boys toys etc, I actually did the smiley face ideal when I created it but thought it was a bit cheesey for the Market range they will have adults and kids that's why I stuck to what I think is a nice font with a subtle hint if kidish with the colour theme/ idea. ,
- mydo0
i always thought it was red and yellow and pink and blue! but google says i'm wrong.
- MrT0
I like the colours but I don't quite get the R O Y G B I V of a rainbow. But then my monitor could be fooked.
- instil_design0
Richard of york gave battle in vain, its the "proper" rainbow colours red orange yellow green blue indigo violet. Ive gone for the kids rhyme version though just because my 2yr old can sing this one :) lol
- pillhead0
Like it, not to sure about the grey colour, The Kerning in Superstore could do with some work.
- mydo0
- mydo0
my eyes see - red orange yellow green blue violet
you cant spell toyshop with that though.
would you consider toysho?
- dMullins0
wut about teh blind childrunz?
- doesnotexist0
it looks too dry...uninspired, and a bit like you just chose a trendy font. try drawing something maybe?
- I'm gonna play round with a ident based on the colours, to put in the White spaceinstil_design
- baseline_shift0
needs more refinement.
I understand the need to go simple and readable, but you could make this a bit more 'playful' or 'child like'. Maybe extending a couple ascenders a couple points. make the O smaller. Give it a bit of play.
also consider going in a logical 'rainbow' order for the colors of the letters.
i like the use of neutra here
- Geith0
not bad. the yellow gets a bit lost and might disappear at smaller sizes.
- and if you photocopy itDancer
- my thoughts as welllocustsloth