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- Dancer0
I would leave it.... as creative- said looks good
- erikjonsson0
i was gonna write something. but then i changed my mind =)
- skt0
my mother always told me that if i can't say anything nice...
- ... to just shut up and keep banging your ol mum in the arse while your daddy takes polaroids.somatica
- Just because you're good, doesn't mean you have to be a cunt.somatica
- lol, i wonder how many toys you would chuck out of the pram if i had actually said anything.skt
- somatica, just cos your shit mate doesn't mean you have to be a super double cuntset
- doctor0
Redant said it.
You could gain much from using a grid, when designing your layout. Also you need to consider that people use different screen resolutions, so that fluid top bar gets really wide in my settings. It moves the headline completely out of focus. So either make all the content fluid or make the top bar fixed for a certain res (ie. 960px).
Your index page is a splash screen with nothing interesting on it. You should in stead push some of your important information up front, to that space. It's not worth it playing with users' patience.
Consider a different color palette. What do you want to tell people by using brown, white and black?
- bulletfactory0
your splash screen did not make a splash.
- ESPtype0
this just make me want to punch you... "I am currently attending Ringling College of Art and Design in Sarasota, Florida. I'm majoring in Graphic and Interactive Communications and minoring in the Business of Art and Design. From here I intend to pursue a master's degree, then maybe doctoral, teach, write, and eventually rule the world."
- skt0
- kewHexton0
hot bod?
- "world renowned motivational exercisologist"kewHexton
- andrew is this you?kewHexton
- This is me. Not ashamed of it.andrewwwahlin
- more power to you brotherkewHexton
- brandelec0
i love how qbn can be so harsh yet so caring
- Jaline0
First, I would say get rid of the splash page.
- you spelt, 'entire site' wrong.skt
- That made me laugh but you're evil! EVIL, I SAY!Jaline
- haha christ.jiaf
- Hey, some people wanted a starting point. Here it is.Jaline
- The splash page will be going away when I leave school.andrewwwahlin
- OK, sounds good.Jaline
- sorry Jaline, "haha christ" was aimed at skt's comment.jiaf
- harlequino0
You need to spend some significant time looking at the work of major brands, agencies, and well known designers. Then, you need to do a lot of spec work.
- doctor0
Where'd you go, Andrew?
- Oh he's here.
http://www.youtube.c…
:Dharlequino - hahahabrandelec
- mintandrewwwahlin
- Oh he's here.
- rson0
ouch
- Milan0
It's very obvious that you just got out of school. Definitely pick up some more books on grids, typography, color theory...
- andrewwwahlin0
I'm a freshman, in class all day today... unable to read the comments of QBN's finest. I wasn't expecting this much of a turn out.
- take it with a grain of salt...D_Dot
- yes it is a slow dayrson
- I was anticipating worse.andrewwwahlin
- there is a future for you here :) lolssea_sea
- and 2.5 grains of pepper, mix wellMilan
- uberdesigner0
the colors are ugly
- andrewwwahlin0
To all of you who offered up real advice,
Thank you. I made some changes, and will make some more.
To all of you who were just assholes,
Thank you for not disappointing me.
- I think you should stfu and appreciate the honesty.set
- I was being sincere. The combination of harsh reality and constructive criticism really helped me out today.andrewwwahlin
- Oh ok, cool. Good on ya.set
- uberdesigner0
better colors. the nav should butt below the welcome/the shots. fix the grid
- kgvs720
It looks good, I like the favicon better than the logo on the page. You might want to consider using one or the other, they look a little different. As far as people talking shit, we all start out as rookies, practices only makes you better.