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- univers0
looks like shit. Start Over. =P
- MissB0
You have some type legibility issues. But other than that it's interesting.
- univers0
Out of all seriousness now, I did notice being in your selected work that when I scroll down on the work, the body copy doesnt move up, and sits on top of your work. That does bug me if it's intentional.
- thats intentional
i know its not ideal but i like itWeLoveNoise - annoyed me too.toe_knee
- +1
Looks like a bugpylon - well, at least you understand the point of your portfolio site and that visitors don't really matter ;)OSFA
- Didn't like it either. Have you tested it on some of your users?doctor
- it's fucking stupid - change itjevad
- thats intentional
- Dancer0
ahhhhh
Still a holding page for me :(
- mimeartist_com0
you need a neat bit of code so that when the images go up the page they avoid the copy, and move it across 20 pixels so doesn't then bump into your ident
- i kno wha u mean but again it was done on purposeWeLoveNoise
- looks like a mistake rather than you being avant garde thoughmimeartist_com
- WeLoveNoise0
i know its not the best example of usability but it was never intended for a wide audience. It is a simply an abstract experiment of portraying my work
- potential clients will see it as a mistake thoughtoe_knee
- who needs clients?hallelujah
- uan0
nice and smooth site...
...what I didn't like: the type above the images, i.e. when you click on showcase and then click on the little animated arrow to move the screenshots up, the textinformation overlaps the images (and makes the textinformation unaccessible).
a similar problem is when you open the showcases, the most right projects are not readable over that smoke-grey-backgroundimage.
- airey0
i like it.
- sofakingbanned0
looks nice. good job luke skywalker.
- mistermik0
work images are too small chief.
and 45 lines are old
can you get browser scroller to work?- yes i am going to be fixing an as3 scroller onto the images and applying a mask to avoid test conflictingWeLoveNoise
- phatlee0
Are you a freelancer?
- yupWeLoveNoise
- Have you worked for any agencies?phatlee
- a fair few ?WeLoveNoise
- All in Manc?phatlee
- no leeds, manc, bham
y u ask
u work in manc ?WeLoveNoise
- NotByHand0
From a purely aesthetic standpoint, I think your site is nice.
Being that you are a freelancer, it seems to have the right balance of a clean sorta corporate feel and a touch of funky-freshness to show that you got game.
- Chimp0
I like the slick transitions but the content is a little small. Also I would expect the images to link through to the site.
Nice work.
- fodcj0
Really like it but can't read the text which goes over the dotted background image.
- roundabout0
Text unreadable 8,7,6 section. Not to sure about you section names, they sound portentous.
- tried to explain the two side to every project. a brief and its delivery. not pretentious > just factWeLoveNoise
- JerseyRaindog0
Can't read the text either over certain sections. Other than that looks nice. But fix the text. Lazy not too.
- johnnnnyh0
i quite like it - but agree with text issues, mainly in the actual work descriptions. Otherwise, I'd say it's pretty good.
- doctor0
- Problem with type legibility (maybe you could increase font size or contrast).
- Problem with scroll function: It took a little while to find the scroll arrow, and the content overlaps (maybe you could allow window scrolling).
- Bigger pics of your work would be nice.
- I would look into the "Visual designer [Luke Finch]" type and either increase letter spacing or choose a lighter font weight.
- It should be easier to find your way back to the frontpage (maybe you could make the logo clickable).I like the over all feel of the design though, as it has a kind of good "rhythm" to it. Keep it up. :)
- I would recommend a light weight usability test, ie. Steve Krug's trunk test.doctor
- Imposeum0
great ish man. keep the Flash rolling.
- WeLoveNoise0
people........ thanks for all your comments......... really means alot, especially coming top designers such as yourselves.
your crits have been noted and will make the website more up to scratch in due course. think we firmly established theres a text problem [not just my dyslexia then]
thanks again peeps :)
- not that dyslexia has anything to do with it [just wana use it as an excuse]WeLoveNoise