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- skt0
not bad..
the text is not readable as everyone else said, i would include thumbnails of the work rather than just text (you have the space), and make the screenshots much, much bigger.
- wow didnt expect u to comment
so thanks, agree tho maybe i have 2 much explaining ut wantd explain the detailWeLoveNoise
- wow didnt expect u to comment
- gung_hoek0
very good, apart from the unreadable text as it was said before. I´d ditch that background graphic thing alltogether, but that´s a matter of taste I suppose.
one other thing, if one could switch to the next/previous project of the list, after having selected a project, the user wouldn´t have to go back-forth-back-forth to the overview. would make for a nicer user experience IMO. be good!
- nice point
not about the bg - thats half tha beauty of the site so not listening to thatWeLoveNoise
- nice point
- WeLoveNoise0
bump *
- neverblink0
Took me a while to get the projects-scroll (>)
- will have to address the issue when putting new projects and print workWeLoveNoise
- ESKEMA0
Like it a lot. agree with the overlaying text, I understand your visual experimentation but you could achieve it in another way that doesn't seem to be an error.
your contact should be there at al times, find it pointless to click on contact just to display the contact below. put it visible and ditch the "contact"
great job!
- 7point340
i dig it. i think the layout is clean and light and simple. very nice.
my concerns are the same as everyone else's:
some of the type seems small. it might only need a bump of 1 point in some areas but i think it's worth a look.
and the floating text thing. change it. have it bump out to the right. have it float up with the images. or put it on a white background and have the images go underneath that.
- WeLoveNoise0
people........ thanks for all your comments......... really means alot, especially coming top designers such as yourselves.
your crits have been noted and will make the website more up to scratch in due course. think we firmly established theres a text problem [not just my dyslexia then]
thanks again peeps :)
- not that dyslexia has anything to do with it [just wana use it as an excuse]WeLoveNoise
- Imposeum0
great ish man. keep the Flash rolling.
- doctor0
- Problem with type legibility (maybe you could increase font size or contrast).
- Problem with scroll function: It took a little while to find the scroll arrow, and the content overlaps (maybe you could allow window scrolling).
- Bigger pics of your work would be nice.
- I would look into the "Visual designer [Luke Finch]" type and either increase letter spacing or choose a lighter font weight.
- It should be easier to find your way back to the frontpage (maybe you could make the logo clickable).I like the over all feel of the design though, as it has a kind of good "rhythm" to it. Keep it up. :)
- I would recommend a light weight usability test, ie. Steve Krug's trunk test.doctor
- johnnnnyh0
i quite like it - but agree with text issues, mainly in the actual work descriptions. Otherwise, I'd say it's pretty good.
- JerseyRaindog0
Can't read the text either over certain sections. Other than that looks nice. But fix the text. Lazy not too.
- roundabout0
Text unreadable 8,7,6 section. Not to sure about you section names, they sound portentous.
- tried to explain the two side to every project. a brief and its delivery. not pretentious > just factWeLoveNoise
- fodcj0
Really like it but can't read the text which goes over the dotted background image.
- Chimp0
I like the slick transitions but the content is a little small. Also I would expect the images to link through to the site.
Nice work.
- NotByHand0
From a purely aesthetic standpoint, I think your site is nice.
Being that you are a freelancer, it seems to have the right balance of a clean sorta corporate feel and a touch of funky-freshness to show that you got game.
- phatlee0
Are you a freelancer?
- yupWeLoveNoise
- Have you worked for any agencies?phatlee
- a fair few ?WeLoveNoise
- All in Manc?phatlee
- no leeds, manc, bham
y u ask
u work in manc ?WeLoveNoise
- mistermik0
work images are too small chief.
and 45 lines are old
can you get browser scroller to work?- yes i am going to be fixing an as3 scroller onto the images and applying a mask to avoid test conflictingWeLoveNoise
- sofakingbanned0
looks nice. good job luke skywalker.
- airey0
i like it.
- uan0
nice and smooth site...
...what I didn't like: the type above the images, i.e. when you click on showcase and then click on the little animated arrow to move the screenshots up, the textinformation overlaps the images (and makes the textinformation unaccessible).
a similar problem is when you open the showcases, the most right projects are not readable over that smoke-grey-backgroundimage.