Logo Crit
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- ieatflamingo0
aside from how it looks... i'm not understanding this. how does this logo represent a tutoring service? Gardian angel?
- irrelevant0
EOS was selected by client and here is their response associated with it
"reading about eos the goddess as she opened the gates to heaven which is interesting because getting into college is associated with opening gates"- But I had a card to have access to most rooms in College...
Maybe she should hold a hall pass or something...VectorMasked
- But I had a card to have access to most rooms in College...
- irrelevant0
thanks for the feedback
- ukit0
The main thing that doesn't work is the substitution of the letter E. Change that and you'll be on much more solid ground.
- iCanHasQBN0
the bottom of it looks like a hand pointing down.
- adev0
the green, plus a first glimpse and seeing bird wings, made me read it as Eco Seek...
- lifterBARON0
as everyone said before.. kerning is something you should pay more attention too.. next.. font choice. your font isn't really all that good in my opinion. it says cheap to me. next, color is important to set mood or theme. i dont really know if green is the way to go.. if so.. look at different variations of green. check out colorlovers.com
the angel or what ever could maybe be more gestural.. at least take a look at a more obvious silhouette. the swoosh is cliche and in low taste.
sorry. this all sounds a little rough.. but im not trying to be an ass.. just take it all into consideration..
word.
- are you the same lifterbaron that posts on the egoist?jevad
- dog_opus0
If you fix the kerning, things will improve greatly. Beyond that: The problem with the swoosh is that it doesn't denote (or even connote) the letter "O." I would try using the lowercase "O" of the font. Maybe even rotate it. I would also rotate the angel 15ยบ or so to make it harmonize better with the italic text (unless that's how you want it). You're off to a really great start, though.
- doesnotexist0
you're thinking too much. think less.
- arsyusha0
Can't read the O. Try to make it the same width as the rest of letters.
- meffid0
ES eek!
- uncle_helv0
Awful name you have to work with. Until you told us, I didn't read it as having an 'O', I'm not too sure the Goddess sits too comfortable in the logo and the idea of said goddess needs explaining, which doesn't help, and for some reason I am reminded of the BT piper, which chills me to the core... typography needs tweeking the 'S and E' are too tight, needs a bit a wee bit of kerning, I like the colours though!
- PSYKHO0
I think remove the angel and the HALO swish and just keep it simple. Don't mind the type used but maybe you could do something with the "O" I know its not original but I don't feel your current logo.
- thestevo0
Id like to make the point that opening the gates of college, is nothing like opening the gates of heaven. I think trying to associate the two are a bit backwards, which will probably result in a misleading logo.
Saying that I think opening the (college) gates of 'opportunity' or whatever is a good direction though.
- mistermik0
where's baby jesus?
- youmustfeed0
I think a more subtle execution would be to use just the wings, or just the halo rather than all the bells and whistles. The kerning is bad (as mentioned) and at the minute, the halo isnt working as either an 'o' or a halo.
Overall, i think it could/should be a lot simpler.