Logo Crit
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- Shepstar150
Don't know if anyone wrote this before: if the firm is written EOSeek why use only small letters in the logo. Wouldn't it make sense to have the same capitals in the logo?
- itstimefortea0
if you have to use that angel, try separating the icon from the type and don't substitute the letter 'o'. have a nice clean legible piece of type and a solid icon. i don't think it works the way you have combined them. i would either stack them or keep them side by side. but i'm not too mad about the angel generally.
- Agree. Angel is too fiddley. WOnder how it reproduces at a small size and on the webDancer
- yeah i think i nicely executed piece of type would be much betteritstimefortea
- roundabout0
"Not gonna work. It reads "e seek"
That how I read it, but I am Dyslexic.
- youmustfeed0
I think a more subtle execution would be to use just the wings, or just the halo rather than all the bells and whistles. The kerning is bad (as mentioned) and at the minute, the halo isnt working as either an 'o' or a halo.
Overall, i think it could/should be a lot simpler.
- mistermik0
where's baby jesus?
- thestevo0
Id like to make the point that opening the gates of college, is nothing like opening the gates of heaven. I think trying to associate the two are a bit backwards, which will probably result in a misleading logo.
Saying that I think opening the (college) gates of 'opportunity' or whatever is a good direction though.
- PSYKHO0
I think remove the angel and the HALO swish and just keep it simple. Don't mind the type used but maybe you could do something with the "O" I know its not original but I don't feel your current logo.
- uncle_helv0
Awful name you have to work with. Until you told us, I didn't read it as having an 'O', I'm not too sure the Goddess sits too comfortable in the logo and the idea of said goddess needs explaining, which doesn't help, and for some reason I am reminded of the BT piper, which chills me to the core... typography needs tweeking the 'S and E' are too tight, needs a bit a wee bit of kerning, I like the colours though!
- meffid0
ES eek!
- arsyusha0
Can't read the O. Try to make it the same width as the rest of letters.
- doesnotexist0
you're thinking too much. think less.
- dog_opus0
If you fix the kerning, things will improve greatly. Beyond that: The problem with the swoosh is that it doesn't denote (or even connote) the letter "O." I would try using the lowercase "O" of the font. Maybe even rotate it. I would also rotate the angel 15ยบ or so to make it harmonize better with the italic text (unless that's how you want it). You're off to a really great start, though.
- lifterBARON0
as everyone said before.. kerning is something you should pay more attention too.. next.. font choice. your font isn't really all that good in my opinion. it says cheap to me. next, color is important to set mood or theme. i dont really know if green is the way to go.. if so.. look at different variations of green. check out colorlovers.com
the angel or what ever could maybe be more gestural.. at least take a look at a more obvious silhouette. the swoosh is cliche and in low taste.
sorry. this all sounds a little rough.. but im not trying to be an ass.. just take it all into consideration..
word.
- are you the same lifterbaron that posts on the egoist?jevad
- adev0
the green, plus a first glimpse and seeing bird wings, made me read it as Eco Seek...
- iCanHasQBN0
the bottom of it looks like a hand pointing down.
- ukit0
The main thing that doesn't work is the substitution of the letter E. Change that and you'll be on much more solid ground.
- irrelevant0
thanks for the feedback