Logo Crit
Logo Crit
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- lifterBARON0
as everyone said before.. kerning is something you should pay more attention too.. next.. font choice. your font isn't really all that good in my opinion. it says cheap to me. next, color is important to set mood or theme. i dont really know if green is the way to go.. if so.. look at different variations of green. check out colorlovers.com
the angel or what ever could maybe be more gestural.. at least take a look at a more obvious silhouette. the swoosh is cliche and in low taste.
sorry. this all sounds a little rough.. but im not trying to be an ass.. just take it all into consideration..
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- are you the same lifterbaron that posts on the egoist?jevad