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    If you fix the kerning, things will improve greatly. Beyond that: The problem with the swoosh is that it doesn't denote (or even connote) the letter "O." I would try using the lowercase "O" of the font. Maybe even rotate it. I would also rotate the angel 15ยบ or so to make it harmonize better with the italic text (unless that's how you want it). You're off to a really great start, though.

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