Logo Crit
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- forbes0
wheres the 'p' gone? is it called toomuffin?
lose the reflection and its nice
- skt0
tod muffin.
also, the placement of the baking tray doesn't feel right at all. i don't really like the font. and i think it is an fairly awful name to begin with.
- menos0
pretty nice, what font is that? i would consider looking over that P, too close to a D and i think that in the colour version the cake thingy looks better than in the 1 color jobs...
- Dust_Mine0
defo the top on ^^^ lose the reflection and make the p longer
- Jaline0
Do you need "web baked goodness"? Sounds really awkward, grammatically-speaking.
I think the "p" will grow on me. Short like a muffin. And the tops of the "t" and "f"s remind me of the aroma wafting.
- BaskerviIle0
Top of the muffin you ya!
- irrelevant0
Baskerville, that is where the idea originated from.. ;)
- Jaline0
As for the negatives: no shadow, and the placement of the tray and "TM" are strange.
- goodidealuke0
Swap the m out for two muffins
- 23kon0
the p needs its descender as at the moment it looks a little awkward like a backwards 'a'. i do kind of like it though but it isnt easy to read if you werent into type/logos.
i like the font used for 'topmuffin' - it looks really retro and well suited to a cookie/muffin or these retrolooking homebaking kits you get.
reflection isnt nice.
and i agree that the tray is too close to the Twhat about doing something with the shape of the top of a muffin - the bit that spills over the papercup. maybe you could add this shape as a crown?
jaline is spot on with the swoosh's on the F's being like the waft of homebaking
- moamoa0
do what tank02 said
- chossy0
Number one and with a p please but no wet floor reflection.
- tank020
Hint of the day:
putting dégradés in your logos will fuck up all your printwork,
there are only a few who printers who manage the print
it the way its on the screen. for corporate livery its even worse
when you have to mix 2 pantone colours to achieve it.
- WeLoveNoise0
fuck me - ive seen it all now
- pressplay0
I like the font but I have some problems with that backing tin. looks like one of these blister packs pills are in. placing is strange, too.
- irrelevant0
- Luv it!! Do NOT change anything else or i'll NEVER EVA buy your muffins!Mishga