Logo Crit
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- dog_opus0
Much better! If you're going to have the catchphrase in there, shouldn't "web" and "baked" be hyphenated? (In line with Jaline's grammar comment.)
- 2cents0
Looks like muffin batter, not baked muffins. Is that the intent?
I'm assuming that that you're portraying that they're baked, hence the crumbs. If so, I think you should make them look as though they've raised. Right now it kind of looks like the top of a Lego block.
- irrelevant0
actually, the intent was that they are baked, and their solutions are so good that they are all gone. The tin is empty with crumbs showing that they have already been eaten.
- ukit0
i think that might be a step too far, maybe have the muffins actually in there.
Nice job overall, though. I like the type you choose.
- agreed. a tray full of muffins would be much more visual and go better with the display/retro font.horton
- ... the empty try as is looks too geometric to be coupled with that font.horton
- I think it's too hard to "read" (visually) at a small sizeukit
- hmmm...at the same time, a tray full of muffins may be too heavy. But it could work.Jaline
- didn't see the"empty" tray
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- horton0
the wordmark is great, but i don't understand the empty muffin tray (so good they're all gone?)... seems like an easy out for avoiding what would be a more challenging muffin illustration... but maybe only a designer is gonna think that?
- ah answered just above as i typed.. as ukit says a bit of a stretch imho.horton
- irrelevant0
I do have some illustrations with the muffins already in there, but I personally just liked the empty muffin tray compared to the ones with them in there.. it looked clip art-ish. I thought this was more of an original idea.. but hey this is a crit, so please carry on.. thanks for all of the feedback.
- irrelevant0
also, the muffin tray is one that only actually bakes just the top of the muffin, hence the decreased depth of the pan.
- ukit0
"web development company"
Almost missed that part, here I was thinking they were actually muffins you could order over the web:D
- 2cents0
I don't think people will see it as an empty tray, hence some of the replies above. If it is indeed empty, shouldn't the cups where the muffins sit be deeper? Looks like you'd baking 1" tall muffins.
I think it's a stretch. I mean the company is called Topmuffin, but there is zero focus on any muffins.
- +1utopian1
- that's true. the holes are not deep at all.Jaline
- That's why I thought it was filled with batter. You usually keep a gap at the top for the muffins to rise.2cents
- What if they are just making muffin tops.
*Top of the muffin TO you*VectorMasked - That's an even further stretch.2cents