Logo Crit
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- irrelevant0
also, the muffin tray is one that only actually bakes just the top of the muffin, hence the decreased depth of the pan.
- ukit0
"web development company"
Almost missed that part, here I was thinking they were actually muffins you could order over the web:D
- 2cents0
I don't think people will see it as an empty tray, hence some of the replies above. If it is indeed empty, shouldn't the cups where the muffins sit be deeper? Looks like you'd baking 1" tall muffins.
I think it's a stretch. I mean the company is called Topmuffin, but there is zero focus on any muffins.
- +1utopian1
- that's true. the holes are not deep at all.Jaline
- That's why I thought it was filled with batter. You usually keep a gap at the top for the muffins to rise.2cents
- What if they are just making muffin tops.
*Top of the muffin TO you*VectorMasked - That's an even further stretch.2cents
- forbes0
wheres the 'p' gone? is it called toomuffin?
lose the reflection and its nice
- skt0
tod muffin.
also, the placement of the baking tray doesn't feel right at all. i don't really like the font. and i think it is an fairly awful name to begin with.
- menos0
pretty nice, what font is that? i would consider looking over that P, too close to a D and i think that in the colour version the cake thingy looks better than in the 1 color jobs...
- Dust_Mine0
defo the top on ^^^ lose the reflection and make the p longer
- Jaline0
Do you need "web baked goodness"? Sounds really awkward, grammatically-speaking.
I think the "p" will grow on me. Short like a muffin. And the tops of the "t" and "f"s remind me of the aroma wafting.
- BaskerviIle0
Top of the muffin you ya!
- irrelevant0
Baskerville, that is where the idea originated from.. ;)
- Jaline0
As for the negatives: no shadow, and the placement of the tray and "TM" are strange.
- goodidealuke0
Swap the m out for two muffins
- 23kon0
the p needs its descender as at the moment it looks a little awkward like a backwards 'a'. i do kind of like it though but it isnt easy to read if you werent into type/logos.
i like the font used for 'topmuffin' - it looks really retro and well suited to a cookie/muffin or these retrolooking homebaking kits you get.
reflection isnt nice.
and i agree that the tray is too close to the Twhat about doing something with the shape of the top of a muffin - the bit that spills over the papercup. maybe you could add this shape as a crown?
jaline is spot on with the swoosh's on the F's being like the waft of homebaking
- moamoa0
do what tank02 said
- chossy0
Number one and with a p please but no wet floor reflection.
- tank020
Hint of the day:
putting dégradés in your logos will fuck up all your printwork,
there are only a few who printers who manage the print
it the way its on the screen. for corporate livery its even worse
when you have to mix 2 pantone colours to achieve it.