new portfolio, need crit?
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- nbonaddio
hello everyone.
if you have a spare moment, i would like some crit of my new portfolio at http://www.nikbonaddio.com. from an ego perspective, it would also be nice if you remembered the name or the site lockjaw, but if not, then that's cool too.
thank you and good day.
- moamoa0
doesn´t look like a portfolio, looks more like a news site
- a nicely design news site, but a news site nonethelessjkmohr
- A personal portfolio with a Search option on it is so unnecessary that it kinda comes across as smugtheairtonight
- I agree with both of youmoamoa
- doesnotexist0
too much going on, looks like a blog
- ukit0
It looks pretty nice, but I have to ask - do you really walk around with a hat with your initials on it?
- monNom0
fucked in ie6.
- redant0
its pretty nice, it's jus theres alot going on. I like your logo super cute.
- epigraph0
I just don't understand the portfolio/blog thing. It is a turnoff to me. All it does is distract the viewer from the thing you hope they came to see: the work.
- utopian0
oh boy, why it's yet another blog!
Enough said
- uncle_helv0
It looks like the roof has come off, or the lights have gone out, either way it's not great!
- myshoeshurt0
it just overpowers your work, i was exhausted before i got there.
- nbonaddio0
alright everyone, thank you for the new replies. sounds like i need the use of a good editor.
- sureshot0
yeah its morning were I am at. I need a croissant.
- nbonaddio0
so, curious, in comparison to:
which i banged out in like six hours, the new one is worse because it's too dense even though it's got richer content and design? or is it better, but just needs some judicious cutting of the fat?
- utopian0
Hey Candy!