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- epigraph0
VERY close IMHO. I think the shot glasses are way too detailed. Maybe I don't like the font ARMS is written in. Otherwise it looks like what it is...cheers!
- Studiospooky0
I like the concept. I think its lillustrated too literally. I think you you should simplify and symbolise more. The scroll... nice draftsmanship, the glasses, less so. The keylines: sharp and strong, the multiple tones of brown and transparency effect: weakening the presence and adding fuss.
Maybe have the A.R.M.S letters as though etched on the glasses ratehr than bobbing about like a Carry-On film?
Just my QBN allowance of ten words maximum on the subject.
- maybe the latters of ARMS should sink??? just a suggestion.epigraph
- shouldbeworking0
yeah i like it, i think there is something a little awkward about the floating letters, maybe work the font more??
- contia10
The shot glasses seem out of proportion.
Seem Long and thin (glass-like) rather then wide and shorter.
(shot-glass like)
- dbloc0
this doesn't say punk to me
- ComicSans_Rocks0
My first impression at first glance, I thought it was a set of teeth or something denture related. Sorry it looks like clip art...
- ukit0
First impression was that it was for a restaurant or brewery, not a band. It looks a little too classical and tasteful to be punk rock.
- scrap_paper0
too complicated for a logo. At smaller sizes it will look like an inkblot