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I like the concept. I think its lillustrated too literally. I think you you should simplify and symbolise more. The scroll... nice draftsmanship, the glasses, less so. The keylines: sharp and strong, the multiple tones of brown and transparency effect: weakening the presence and adding fuss.
Maybe have the A.R.M.S letters as though etched on the glasses ratehr than bobbing about like a Carry-On film?
Just my QBN allowance of ten words maximum on the subject.
- maybe the latters of ARMS should sink??? just a suggestion.epigraph