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- enjine0
great work dude
- Tara0
Winter,
are you aware that your website link points to a logo? maybe you did that on purpose?
- ********0
hey blast, yeah i plan on staying around phoenix for now.
gracias everyone for the comments =)
- toe_knee0
nice work, you'll go places
- sureshot0
fresh work..me dig it the most.
noise job.
- winter0
I wasn't aware of that TaraTara. Thanks.
That's not my stuff. Someone changed it and it wasn't me (!?)
- sureshot0
nice igloo!
- winter0
hmmm. some upper devil's around i guess ;)
ok. i get it. that's ok.
- chz0
awesome work Allen!
- ldww0
kick ass work dude. awsome. nice. great. word.
is this all real client work or student projects?
oh, and the bloom logo reminds me of a penis or something :)
- Soler0
it rules
- ********0
hahaha, yes!.. it reminds me of a penis too!! ;p
it's all student projects... :)
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- mrdobolina0
great stuff antonelli. one pagers are great when you have a strong portfolio. I dont, so mine is flash :)
- ldww0
kick ass nevertheless
good luckand maybe add an index page to your site.
- nocomply0
The work looks great. Seeing as how you are fresh out of school i think its fine just the way it is.
However...i think its important to make it easy for potential employers to get in touch with you.
I would maybe add a contact form on your info page, as well as a resume that's available in both PDF and HTML form. Let us know how to job search goes.
- rasko40
very high quality work.
- neenaw0
very high quality work.
rasko4
(Jan 31 06, 14:24)And you don't hear that very often.
- monNom0
I would make a note directly on the pieces (in description line) that they were not designer/client works.
as it is now, they appear very legit, and may lead to some confusion come interview time.
really nice stuff BTW!
- ********0
nocomply: good point!
mon: I have this under the Site header in the info page:
"...Most of the pieces you'll find here are either personal projects, or assignments completed for school."
....Do you think that's enough? I should probably swap the word "most" with "all".
thx for the kind words every1
- piperboytoy0
looks great. your work has improved a lot.