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- horton0
....Do you think that's enough? I should probably swap the word "most" with "all".
thx for the kind words every1
Antonelli
(Jan 31 06, 14:59)oh yes absolutely clarify that.
half the battle as a designer is making the things you create on screen look equally good in print.
and then the other half is dealing with clients and always comprimising your designs.. which also isn't an issue at with school work.
really nice stuff regardless. i'm sure you'll get good work.
- horton0
and U&LC is not exactly fictitious.. some crusty old art directors might tear your head off if they read that :)
U&LC
(Upper & Lower Case) Font sample CD and Contest Poster for a ficticious type foundry.
- Dancer0
http://www.bloom-design.com/
;)Great Work
!!
- monNom0
I'd list it for each piece, something like: 'school project'
should suffice.Horton has the right idea.
a potential employer may feel that you misrepresented yourself by not spelling it out plain as day.
that said, the work speaks for itself. you should have no problem getting good work, even with a disclaimer.
- ********0
Antonelli ...
you are a very nice and well rounded designer. this thread is so positive i would really love to hear about howe your career folds out thru the years.
i saw you as a working professional and your work shows nothing less. i am so very envious as you have a nice path ahead of you and you are arriving at a nice point in time technologicaly speaking in compared to the fossils such as myself and a lot of the other people here. i like it. it flows well and i think adding the contact page and resume page as stated before would really strengthen the whole dynamics of your work. remember, its a one pager, and you want to keep the "user" on your page and to remember it.your colours work great, i said it before, its pleasing to my eye palette. almost caalming. or maybe thats the dope trees i just smoked who knows.
hehe!! sorry!!
GOOD LUCK!!!!!!
- ********0
yep, i'm aware that U&LC is real. But that was actually for a Design with Type class, and the instructor assigned everyone a "fake" type foundry to work with. There was "upper & lower case", "points & picas", and some other one...
I don't really think the instructor knew of u&lc mag.
- ********0
hi dancer, yes they are oddly similar.. and i had contacted them about it. turns out it was just a conincidence.
Bloom was going to be the name of my future design company if i ever made it big... they said i could use it in my folio as long as i dont start up a company called "Bloom", lol. feel free to contact them about it. they already know ;)
- c_valencia0
mad skills, beautiful work.
- ********0
epill, so nice of you. made my day, ty.
i hope it all works out for me too! i feel like i have still so much to learn. i'll keep you guys updated =)
- dopepope0
very nice work there
- ********0
go public, young man
- Tad_Cautious0
i like your stuff, very cool. your site reminds me of hiten's site:
- ********0
awesome work, rand - wow.
- ********0
Good stuff, even though you have limited work which is prob due to you being younger? Just out of school?
It makes your work shine which is a good thing.
- ********0
thx same. yeah, i turned 21 a couple months ago, so not a lot of work to show (atleast none that i'm overly proud of, lol). i have a corporate ID manual for a trucking company & some hair dye packaging i might add on later though...
- chaztoo0
Seriously bueno, man. Like the presentation, love the work. I want to make out with some of the colors you used. Make out with them!
- Jnr_Madison0
Nicely done :)
Best of luck.
- hiten0
great work. impressed.
- shellie0
yum stuff.
- tehgee0
i realllly like it the only thing is teh one taht is above teh fold isnt my favorite! ;) i think everupne likes the tuff best you should maybe put that 1st