A1 Poster Crit !?
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- blackspade0
hey thanks Cre2done
comments taken thanks im yet to hear back from Client and revise the poster
I have heard that some of the older people who work there had a problem with it (typical)
- cre2done0
I like the 2nd one. However, I would give some sort of visual cue to relate the red title in Mauori (sp) to the maouri verse.
Also I would enlarge the title text. Have something that works on two levels. The eye-catching-from-a-distance title, that brings the viewer in, then follow that up with text that is only discernable from close quarters.
I like the nz/carl blosfeld graphic.
- blackspade0
b b bump
- blackspade0
another version...
- blackspade0
yea i feel its still missing somthing 2 :/
aprecciate any more comments/ideas :)
- freshmode0
I like #5... but can I get a credit somewhere?
=)
Keep working on it though. Still missing something. Not sure what, but something isn't right.
word!
- blackspade0
versions 4,5
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preferences ? thoughts on the pattern in water? im not sure about it
- blackspade0
hey Freshmode
thanks for that feedback, great idea about the reflection * :)
newstoday is so great for stuff like this im stoked
im thinking of adding that grey pattern as a reflection in the waterbut bend it into perspective and tile it as water
stay posted for version 3 :)
- freshmode0
It looks good to me but I agree with a bit of color included. You can do some good stuff with heavy solids in the background and maybe even some sort of reflection in the water of something related to the school or location or audience.
Maybe add some detail to the black areas to more obvious to those who will see it but not know what it is. Even though it is in the native area anyways. Right?
Please update your progress. I would like to see how this turns out.
word!
- blackspade0
thanks everyone! im off home, time for dinner :)
now all i gotta do is run it passed the client
*gulp :/
- BonSeff0
thats cool man.
just one dudes opinion
too bad they picked airstream eh
- blackspade0
thanks Bon
yea the het there has to be in Airstream font :( as that has been a constant in all their print material
but dont mind what youve done with the colour
but still very keen on B & W
- blackspade0
anyone else ? :)
- blackspade0
thanks Lind
I may try that, the Third font they have in their 'brand' is Airstream
which is that font the the 'Get there' is writen in grey. Its kinda too 'Fun' lookin, doesnt suit the poster
- blackspade0
also one other thing
the area that the ferns are coming out of on the NZ shape is 'Dunedin' which is where the University is based, so thats why I have them growing out from the bottom
- lind0
I like #2.
I would use a more decorative font for "Kite Whatchamacalit ..." Make it stand out more.
- blackspade0
the only reason I went blk n white was because of the size it will stand out
also with the typosgraphy, I have to use these fonts so? hmmm what do you mean by stodgy?
The uni colours are primary colours, blue red and yellow
no way I want to use Primary colours! but any suggestions ?