A1 Poster Crit !?
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- blackspade0
hey Freshmode
thanks for that feedback, great idea about the reflection * :)
newstoday is so great for stuff like this im stoked
im thinking of adding that grey pattern as a reflection in the waterbut bend it into perspective and tile it as water
stay posted for version 3 :)
- blackspade0
versions 4,5
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preferences ? thoughts on the pattern in water? im not sure about it
- freshmode0
I like #5... but can I get a credit somewhere?
=)
Keep working on it though. Still missing something. Not sure what, but something isn't right.
word!
- blackspade0
b b bump
- blackspade0
yea i feel its still missing somthing 2 :/
aprecciate any more comments/ideas :)
- cre2done0
I like the 2nd one. However, I would give some sort of visual cue to relate the red title in Mauori (sp) to the maouri verse.
Also I would enlarge the title text. Have something that works on two levels. The eye-catching-from-a-distance title, that brings the viewer in, then follow that up with text that is only discernable from close quarters.
I like the nz/carl blosfeld graphic.
- blackspade0
hey thanks Cre2done
comments taken thanks im yet to hear back from Client and revise the poster
I have heard that some of the older people who work there had a problem with it (typical)
- swollenelbow0
i like two. simple. everything fits in two. negative space is perfect. try once more to move the elements around. you know...
- blackspade0
oh... and the shapes to the right is the outline of New zealand
and there are baby ferns comming out of it, which is a Trad NZ plant, represents life, growth etc, which kinda fits in with the whole university Learning, 'Get Enlightened theme'
i think if it was a International poster it would get lost, but kids from NZ will know what it is strait away :)
- blackspade0
thanks swollen
have moved things aaround a bit ...struggling to fit those 2 paragraphs in on some layouts, since they are so tall n skinny u know what I mean
ill tidy up those hill vector landscapes also eventually
thanks dude!
- swollenelbow0
maybe try to break up the "kite ....." and the "get enlight..."
a bolder "kite ..." above and to the slihgt left of the object on the top right, and the "get enlighte..." around where it is now...
dunno...it's tough, especially if you've been staring at it for hours! =)
- swollenelbow0
stand back. smoke a j...drink a dr pepper, and come back to it in 45 minutes. =)
- BonSeff0
color please
and have some fun with the typography. looks way stodgy
- blackspade0
the only reason I went blk n white was because of the size it will stand out
also with the typosgraphy, I have to use these fonts so? hmmm what do you mean by stodgy?
The uni colours are primary colours, blue red and yellow
no way I want to use Primary colours! but any suggestions ?
- lind0
I like #2.
I would use a more decorative font for "Kite Whatchamacalit ..." Make it stand out more.
- blackspade0
also one other thing
the area that the ferns are coming out of on the NZ shape is 'Dunedin' which is where the University is based, so thats why I have them growing out from the bottom
- blackspade0
thanks Lind
I may try that, the Third font they have in their 'brand' is Airstream
which is that font the the 'Get there' is writen in grey. Its kinda too 'Fun' lookin, doesnt suit the poster