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- teh0
- CanHasQBN0
Second one!
At least it has that gear looking thing. The sunburst in the first logo represents nothing and just looks like you're trying to fill space. It's too line-y and I focus on that more than the company name. Also the top edges of the sunburst lead nowhere, they just cut off in a straight line and it looks unfinished and sloppy.
Go with the second one. It has much better balance the way the two colors are blocked.
- sine0
this thread's annoying...
don't post again until YOU are happy with the design.#1 btw. lose the 19.
- non0
More mountains, please.
:)
- MondoMorphic0
#2
- dbloc0
try a ghosted out mountain in the tan instead of the gear.
- e-wo0
2nd. Very fine work.
- dbloc0
post an update!
- dyspl0
The original garage name seems to be "Garage Sylvestre et Fils" which gives it both a 70's and french feeling. Client wanted to remove the "et fils" part or it's your decision? I would try a version keeping that part.
I'll vote for 2 with previous colors version ; 1st thought when seeing the color scheme was alpine A110. Is the garage specialised in a particular car field? brand? old cars restauration? historic rallye cars? etc...
- dyspl0
I would avoid mountains etc... It's a garage, not a tourist postcards shop :) It should be all about the garage and the work done there.
- +1akrok
- not necessarily.dbloc
- Raised in a touristic area (cote d'azur) there was not any single logo without a reminder about how sunny the place is, and this tends to be the same in every touristic area in france.dyspl
- this tends to be the same in every touristic area in france... I grew very tired of this gimmicks.dyspl
- notverycontrary0
I'm seeing #2 as a big, fat pencil.
- ohhhhhsnap0
the bottom is sexy. looks like a great badge.
- tasty0
#1 feels too American because of the star burst and the curves IMO
#2 for a French Alps Garage
- I like the balance of colors
- The subtle curve of the font is nice too
- iheartfun0
Hmmm top draws my eye more. Both are good though.
- cdub0
it's reading SIL VESTRE to me... kern the L and V a bit.
- i_monk0
The curve in #2 is too slight. Either make it more pronounced or go flat.
- cdub0
Also, the second try looks best IMO
- Ambushstudio0
Looove Neutra...
- k_temp0
second is best.