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- goldieboy0
Nice. I think the 2nd option seems more French Alps.
- goldieboy0
Nice. I think the 2nd option seems more French Alps.
- albums0
I just looked through a few racing books of mine and I believe everything I wrote earlier if you replace American with French. The racing scene, both motorcycle and auto were dominated by bold color and very unique lines. this seems too early, again imo. Even the bicycle teams had very flamboyant color as well. your pallette seems muted
- Perhaps, but you've never actually left Kansas, have you?detritus
- WhiteFace0
- Still not sure about the coloursWhiteFace
- I preferred the first versions. The year is way too small, even when the logo is big like it is hereChimp
- Lose the 19TOMMYxGUNN
- Your original colour was mush better.pillhead
- like the tan betterdbloc
- 2nd gear or somethign else related to auto industry 1st looks too japanese rising sun kinda thingteh
- OSFA0
# 2.
Next question?
- Complexfruit0
Both are solid executions. My only question is what is the motivation for the retro feel to the logo? I only ask because that seems to be norm these days of making logos a vintage feel to it whether it's warranted or not (I've been guilty of this too). Is it to show it's history, stylistic choice or client request?
- you answered your own question.....seems to be norm these daysdbloc
- TOMMYxGUNN0
- nice but I think the 19 is important, no?WhiteFace
- Not reallyTOMMYxGUNN
- yeah it is.CanHasQBN
- nah.....not until 2072dbloc
- could go either way honestlydbloc
- CanHas. No it isn't.TOMMYxGUNN
- Yeah it is.CanHasQBN
- No it isn'tTOMMYxGUNN
- Yeah it is.CanHasQBN
- NO IT ISN'T.TOMMYxGUNN
- Yeah it is.CanHasQBN
- Nope. Not necessary times infinity.TOMMYxGUNN
- Yes it is necessary times infinity to the power of infinity!CanHasQBN
- + your mom!CanHasQBN
- LIBERTIES!
Still not necessary, like your dad!TOMMYxGUNN
- digdre0
remove the orange
maybe make some letters smaller and drop a line under them
- dbloc0
#2 is best.
might need a little more.
The automobile looks a little floaty.
- mg330
I definitely think the second one looks better and more "French Alps." Seems kind of timeless like old Tour De France lettering.
- dobre0
#1 to me have stronger presence since its more balance.
#2 makes me think of scale
- 23kon0
Very nice!
Don't know which I prefer.I don't think the number should just be 72 though as joe bloggs won't put 2+2 together to realise it's meant to be Established 1972.
I think it needs the full 1972.Behind the cog in the second one, what about putting simplified illustration of The Alps or the mountains near the town that the garage is in. Particularly if they are unique shaped hills.
- teh0
- CanHasQBN0
Second one!
At least it has that gear looking thing. The sunburst in the first logo represents nothing and just looks like you're trying to fill space. It's too line-y and I focus on that more than the company name. Also the top edges of the sunburst lead nowhere, they just cut off in a straight line and it looks unfinished and sloppy.
Go with the second one. It has much better balance the way the two colors are blocked.
- sine0
this thread's annoying...
don't post again until YOU are happy with the design.#1 btw. lose the 19.
- non0
More mountains, please.
:)