Help to choose a logo
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- NONEIS0
Neither - start from scratch.
- dMullins0
I think with the stacked SF thing, you might do better with the F in grey, and the S in green since the S is more obvious of a first-read than the F. I could mock it up in PS real quick, but I'm drunk and tired.
- pauliusuza0
- how 2.0 of youmonospaced
- honestly didn't see the SF at firstdbloc
- looks goodutopian
- the type isn't strong or stable enough.Amicus
- yuckVikingKingEleven
- i'm down with the graphic, but the type is just okjaylarson
- i_monk0
The little serifs on the lines are basically lost at this scale, so why bother with them?
- monospaced0
I think your little SF wave mark can be simplified. I think the bottom of the S can become the top of the F by removing one or more lines. Refine the mark and maybe give it a little more prominence (size it up a tiny bit). The green is cool, but with the gray it feels too familiar. Maybe play with color a bit more.
Also, is it Starters, or Starter's?
- fresnobob0
I agree with monospaced, I'd try the SF mark with one less line. I also noticed that the top line in the mark doesnt have the "serif." I don't think the bottom one should either since technically it is the vertical line among horizontal ones. Maybe if it was even more like a dot?
- i_monk0
Just a thought, but when you read the line mark from top to bottom there's a distinct backwards/declining motion. Probably not something you want associated with finance or money in general. It needs more upward directionality – tilt the whole thing to the right, so the bottom of the line-F "reads" first. And get rid of all the serifs.
- trautstudio0
TOP.
clean simple balanced
the infinity symbol gives me the idea that if i were to be funded i will be able to keep going forever.
- desmo0
I see the S and F for V2, but it takes a while to pick out. It should be more immediate for it to work.
- Fax_Benson0
I quite like the SF thing in v1, but the top of the S seems too small.
- Amicus0
Version 1, but the breaks in the text (S/T, R and R/S) are a little much, and work against the infinity concept.
- pauliusuza0
thanks, keep em' coming
- monospaced0
Pick a more respectable typeface, something that communicates trust.
- any example?pauliusuza
- something more designed... the ones you used look like free fonts from a free font website (no offense)monospaced
- and I can't help see NASA in the first one, especially since you removed the crossbar in the A (bad move!)monospaced
- a NICE slab serif might work wonders for youmonospaced
- I'll pass this to the designer, thxpauliusuza
- perhaps http://www.typograph…
trautstudio - you're not the designer?monospaced
- <utopian
- no, i'm notpauliusuza
- no one sees NASA but you mono.dMullins
- i_monk0
1, but with 2's type.
- agree or diff type, symbol could be a bit thinner though, lines seem too thickattentionspan
- awak0
Something to this direction, perhaps. Not sure ´bout the colors though, but with fewer lines at least in the SF and a bit different approach to the letters.
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- horton0
1, but with neither type.
if this logo has anything to do with finances your type is way to causal/sporty/trendy.
think safe, secure, timeless.
- vaxorcist0
I've had to layout all sorts of co-branding logos in a row monstrosities over the years.... where your logo is in competition with others and there are requirements that they are all "the same size"
This results in "squarer" logos getting much more prominence than "horizontal" logos..
so you mighttry these logos out in a "sea of logos" from other brands if you think they're going to sponsor any civic or nonprofit events where somebody has to make a poster with a pile of logos next to each other....