logo crit round 2
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- leftwave
thanks for the great feedback in the previous thread: http://www.qbn.com/topics/635182…
client has narrowed down the concepts to this:
please provide feedback on layout, scale, color, etc. thanks again!!
- ********0
that "p" in the circle is way too clean / sterile for such a playful shape.
Loosen up your "p" in that circle, dude.
- ********0
IS the client on Crack
- ********0
it also feels disjointed, because you are using a different typeface for each "p"
So you really should make that circle "p" distinctive....make it playful, maybe sketch it, but it needs to be way different.
- ********0
pillhead: Did you see the other choices? The client picked the best one, hands down.
This logo has potential.
- 10g00
I dislike the caps at the bottom. it throw off the hierarchy.
the colored capital P should be white.
"by the beach" should sit tucked closer to the "pebbles'
- 10g00
maybe something like that where the b's and p is aligned
- Amicus0
A 'P' formed by a path of pebbles could be cool.
- bjladams0
this is going to cost a lot of money to make into any kind of functional signage- with the strokes being so small
- _niko0
not sure you need the "P" inside the pebble, it's really redundant.
maybe try and do something interesting with the shapes?
- Continuity0
Aside from the p-in-the-shape (which I'm not so keen on), you might want to rethink the weight of your type, especially for 'by the beach.' I don't know how many different applications of this logo there will be, but at small sizes, at a distance, and so on ... it's going to get lost.
- Fax_Benson0
It all seems a bit stiff, particularly the p in the pebble. Maybe try to make it more organic.
similar to above
- detritus0
The latter two directions from davebellechique & Fax_Benson seem the most appropriate, I gotstosay.
If you do go this route though - please don't use the dark stones with the white line motif as seen here - I know I used such things a decade ago, feeling compliant. What I'm saying is, they're terribly overused.
- sebastianfrench0
The Word Mark is too thin. When scale down it will not be visual.
Also remember that logo needs to be flexible (ie. Can be scale down for business card, letterheads, fax, photocopy, web etc etc.)
- miesvan0
try one color, beware with capitals, and sizes, a few ordere in de lines inside...
