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- capn_ron0
I like concept 1, but think the pebbles are a bit too big. The colors on the right hand one are nice, but you can't read by the sea at a small size.
- ideaist0
No work in my office so I might as well work with you on this leftwave!
I think, overall you can do more in terms of incorporating both the imagery of the simplified pebbles AND a sea like illustration in order to really bring it to life!
Use 3+ pebbles as 2 (unfortunately) looks like balls...
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- vitamins0
I personally think concept 3 has the best potential.
- dMullins0
I like number two the most, the top version, but you need to make one of the stones grey.
- chuparosa0
I think there's something in concept 1. Maybe the pebbles shapes could be more organic and maybe overlap with transparency. Type could be more organic or free feeling. Color needs to be explored too. Not sure if that helps....
- leftwave0
- I prefer the first one of these two; looks more feminine, which is your target market.Continuity
- 1st type treatment looks retro and I'd stay w/ lowercase. Takes some time and play w/ it a bit. Don't love gray for this either.chuparosa
- i wouldnt call that scripty font retro at all. looks modern to me.iCanHasQBN
- gabe0
for me, it's easily concept #3 (or the bottom leftmost of the other concepts category). it may not be the "coolest" of the bunch, but i think it perfectly suits the nature of your client.
- Ruffian0
#4 looks like poop
I like the bottom left one from other concepts
- vitamins0
Unfortunately I was thinking of poop for the stacked pebbles too. I still recommend #3
- bzsaw0
I'll offer you another idea to add into the mix.
Write the letter Pebbles free form with pebbles. Have a simplified version of sea foam washing up underneath it with the "by the sea" reversed out of the foam bubbles like it's about to go across the word "Pebbles".
Could make for some really nice exterior signage...
- leftwave0
thanks for the great feedback everyone!!
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- utopian0
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- akrok0
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- pillhead0
2 need more work but getting there my mate.
- Hombre_Lobo0
bottom left is working most for me, maybe its just the typeface i like, but its nice and appropriate its purpose.
perhaps try and create a mark (pebble shape) that works well with the weight and flowy style of that typeface.
- Hombre_Lobo0
saying that the slogan (by the sea) type on the bottom left logo (in other concepts), looks a bit off. maybe try reducing character spacing.
the 't' of the 'the' word looks odd because of its height difference to all the other letters and the 'y' of 'by' looks off also, perhaps too big?
i think if you experiment with these it would look smoother.Im liking it though.