Logo Crit
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Ok guys, this time it's for a paintball company. their original logo can be seen here http://www.deadlywind.comand here is my version, as they wanted me to integrate the hurricane into the new logo.
- dirtydesign0
dig that.
not sure about the glares and all, but looks good.
- dirtydesign0
W is a little weird
- version30
it's near impossible to read deadly wind, i had to look at the full size
- Agreed.imadesigner
- agreedbaseline_shift
- I cannot read what it says? bloody hellpillhead
- identity0
I think the vertical stroke - to - other stroke ration is too much...
All I can read is Verticle strokes...It's just not readable...
- d_rek0
D is a hard read and there's an odd pause with the shear corner of the W. No crazy about the glares/gradients either but I do like the wordmark with the thick holding line. Also very audience appropriate.
- iheartfun0
I like it but at first glance I couldn't really tell that was a "D" and just read leadly....
- nLHb0
I like the illustration. But like version said, it's really hard to read the text.
- whereRI0
AAHAHAHAHAHA
"deadlywind"
HAHAHAHA
i have that sometimes, specially in the morning
- hahasleepyfatso
- Haha! I didn't even think of it *that* way, now I do. What an unfortunate name...nLHb
- itstimefortea0
you don't need all the extra strokes and gradients. the one second down on the left is the most legible. agree with the point above about the w. if you took out the kink that would also make it more readable.
- I like it otherwise. And yeah its pretty appropriate for the audience.itstimefortea
- sleepyfatso0
Yeah, really hard to read. I thought it said deadpound or deadpond. I think the d has something in it though.
- dyspl0
mmmh I would avoid using this free dafont font, or at least customize it a lot to make the logo "personnal".
I would rather make my own caracters.
- MHDC0
- johndiggity0
strokes are a mess. almost illegible. very horizontal. try stacking deadly and wind and play around with it some more (without any strokes.) maybe use a hurricane icon to tie upper and lower together?
- its_only_me0
looks dated.
- inkpink0
it is a paintball company so all extreme aesthetics aside;
too hard to read.
use the d-hurricane logo separately (above) and set "deadlywind" with the normal "d".
- baseline_shift0
really illegible. calm down the strokes and think about a new typeface.
- inkpink0
or if you must use the icon in the word, replace one of the other "d" characters that are less critical for legibility... middle one would work ok.
- seed0
First thought was 'not very readable'.