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- imnotadesigner
quick question... the logo on the left or the one on the right.
Its a minor tweak but I wondering about how it balances
- vitamins0
The one on the right is better. The one on the left is too linear on the left side and then goes up on the right which isn't balanced to me. The one on the right feels better. End of thread. I'm right.
- rkrd0
the one on the right, but the spots where the S touches the O, and the R-G are too dark, maybe you can come up with a nice intersection
- ********0
oh god
- ideaist0
Feels exceptionally forced rather than working with the natural relationships between the letterforms... G & A work together well... Start their and rework it from scratch...
- capn_ron0
of the two, the right is better. the left one is too left heavy.
- kelpie0
Does Morgan make things out of pipecleaners?
- OSFA0
Right
- d_rek0
I Agree with ideast on this one - does feel rather forced. I think you're trying to weave the avant-garde typestyling into letterforms that don't lend themselves to that treatment particularly well because they're not geometric enough in nature. Not that you can't do that, but maybe there is a better type solution for that kind of treatment.
- ********0
Shim: Sailor's patois for an effeminate male and/or transvestite.
- Nothing wrong with mind. We all love the ladyboys, right?********
- Nothing wrong with mind. We all love the ladyboys, right?
- KevinTx0
can you make the logo bigger?
- KevinTx0
i would like to see the M extend out to the left how the A does
- fyoucher10
Can we see what it would look like if you got rid of all of the places where you're extending the letterforms, except the R and H? Simplifying it a bit...
- imnotadesigner0
one on the far right was the original
- ********0
this might be a little cool now... but in a few years it will look like an old trend
- I missed this trendhallelujah
- its right below this comment********
- oh THAT trend... didn't recognize it in this formhallelujah
- mg330
- baseline_shift0
its a bit too tight. the spacing around the letters needs a bit more consistency
- ********0
I think you're trying to do to much. The font looks interesting enough without you playing connect the dots.
- ********0
Morgan Shim, does it say, Morgan Shim?
- KevinTx0
what is morgan shim?
- Mimio0
They should change their name to "Tuckman Marsh."