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- KevinTx0
what is morgan shim?
- Mimio0
They should change their name to "Tuckman Marsh."
- MrNibs0
the 'H' seems really tight comparatively.
- ********0
Morgan Shim, does it say, Morgan Shim?
- ********0
I think you're trying to do to much. The font looks interesting enough without you playing connect the dots.
- baseline_shift0
its a bit too tight. the spacing around the letters needs a bit more consistency
- mg330
- ********0
this might be a little cool now... but in a few years it will look like an old trend
- I missed this trendhallelujah
- its right below this comment********
- oh THAT trend... didn't recognize it in this formhallelujah
- fyoucher10
Can we see what it would look like if you got rid of all of the places where you're extending the letterforms, except the R and H? Simplifying it a bit...
- imnotadesigner0
one on the far right was the original
- KevinTx0
i would like to see the M extend out to the left how the A does
- KevinTx0
can you make the logo bigger?
- ********0
Shim: Sailor's patois for an effeminate male and/or transvestite.
- Nothing wrong with mind. We all love the ladyboys, right?********
- Nothing wrong with mind. We all love the ladyboys, right?
- d_rek0
I Agree with ideast on this one - does feel rather forced. I think you're trying to weave the avant-garde typestyling into letterforms that don't lend themselves to that treatment particularly well because they're not geometric enough in nature. Not that you can't do that, but maybe there is a better type solution for that kind of treatment.
- OSFA0
Right
- kelpie0
Does Morgan make things out of pipecleaners?
- capn_ron0
of the two, the right is better. the left one is too left heavy.
- ideaist0
Feels exceptionally forced rather than working with the natural relationships between the letterforms... G & A work together well... Start their and rework it from scratch...
- ********0
oh god
- rkrd0
the one on the right, but the spots where the S touches the O, and the R-G are too dark, maybe you can come up with a nice intersection