Logo Crit, Brandi G
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- thompson0
boobs in a logo? now i've seen everything.
no really, i'm glad you didn't go that direction...whew....why doesn't she hire a logo designer?
- MHDC0
Back to the drawing board. It's just not right. I finally met with her in person, and the vibe she puts out points to a logo that puts this one at the polar opposite.
She's all about a peacock feather...
so there is my new start.Thanks for all the input, these rush jobs never give me enough perspective.
- get outside. breathe air. get a beer. get laid. perspective will come. life stands still for no one.zenmasterfoo
- HomeCreative0
Could you not turn the B on its side and/or use that as the shape??
- zenmasterfoo0
- or possibly use the bra as the main shape instead of the circle.bulletfactory
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- bulletfactory0
your elements are dangerously small, the tag is hard to read even at this size - any smaller and it will be lost.
- plus, the bra in the 'oo' is a 1st generation idea - push it furtherbulletfactory
- MHDC0
Yeah, I'm getting a "do it over" vibe. I did make some edits, notes taken from Hellrod helped. I simplified it and cleaned it up a bit. Did a test print and it seems to hold detail nicely.
As a background to this mark, Brandi does other work (portraits, weddings, ect.) Same circle only gray and Archer Type is used without any additions. It's very clean. This was just a slightly embellished version, to the original, pink circle instead of gray and I'm trying to show a little playfulness that Brandi's personality reflects. Again, if everyone thinks it's shit... than I'll start from scratch... won't be the first time.
Here are the edits... original draft can be seen above ^
- dirtydesign0
looks like its trying to sell bras
- doesnotexist0
try again
- bigbaby530
I say "keyhole" as if the viewer was looking/spying on whats going on behind the door.
- bigbaby530
What if, instead of boobs, you use a keyhole as the mark like on an old fashioned door...just a thought.
- Ruffian0
The bra looks too childish a la pedo look and in small sizes I doubt it would work.
- akrokdesign0
no need for ™, as is isn't a ™.
the type is too thin, make it small (the logo) and see if its works.
what a hell is going on in the "O's", drop that idea. not good.if you want more personal, make her write her name.
- hellrod0
Your bra curves should arch the other way. High on the outside and low in the middle and curve upwards in the center point. The detail will definitely get lost if it sits in a circle. Also, try making the word photographer smaller and maybe a stronger weight but keep it spread out as is. I don't really understand the trademark on a photographer's name.
- Good notes, I'll make some edits... see where it standsMHDC
- zenmasterfoo0
try to simplify it. maybe a beautifully stylized brassiere with the "brandi grooms photography" reduced in size and as the logo type.
2 cents more.
- TINKLDN0
that will not print well at small sizes.
also, i think you could think about your type choice a little more. archer is a little dry. something a little more sensual. and i would, personally, lose the gimmick.
- MHDC0
Ha! Damn, this whole transgender thing is throwing me off now