Logo Crit, Brandi G
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- detritus0
if it's to be set inside that big pink circle, you're going to lose the detail in the boobs. Either take out the circle, or take out the detail.
- scrameone0
At a small size, the illustration in the o's will not hold up.
- detritus0
why not take out the bra, and make the pink circle nipple-like?
- utopian0
Reminds me of skt's logo, just sayin.
- 7point340
also, it looks a bit off center. i think the ™ is skewing it a bit to the left, but maybe that's just me
- kona0
damn you for making me google 'boudoir'.
that is all.
- bigbaby530
What if, instead of boobs, you use a keyhole as the mark like on an old fashioned door...just a thought.
- bigbaby530
I say "keyhole" as if the viewer was looking/spying on whats going on behind the door.
- MHDC0
Ha! Damn, this whole transgender thing is throwing me off now
- TINKLDN0
that will not print well at small sizes.
also, i think you could think about your type choice a little more. archer is a little dry. something a little more sensual. and i would, personally, lose the gimmick.
- HomeCreative0
Could you not turn the B on its side and/or use that as the shape??
- zenmasterfoo0
try to simplify it. maybe a beautifully stylized brassiere with the "brandi grooms photography" reduced in size and as the logo type.
2 cents more.
- hellrod0
Your bra curves should arch the other way. High on the outside and low in the middle and curve upwards in the center point. The detail will definitely get lost if it sits in a circle. Also, try making the word photographer smaller and maybe a stronger weight but keep it spread out as is. I don't really understand the trademark on a photographer's name.
- Good notes, I'll make some edits... see where it standsMHDC
- MHDC0
Back to the drawing board. It's just not right. I finally met with her in person, and the vibe she puts out points to a logo that puts this one at the polar opposite.
She's all about a peacock feather...
so there is my new start.Thanks for all the input, these rush jobs never give me enough perspective.
- get outside. breathe air. get a beer. get laid. perspective will come. life stands still for no one.zenmasterfoo
- akrokdesign0
no need for ™, as is isn't a ™.
the type is too thin, make it small (the logo) and see if its works.
what a hell is going on in the "O's", drop that idea. not good.if you want more personal, make her write her name.
- thompson0
boobs in a logo? now i've seen everything.
no really, i'm glad you didn't go that direction...whew....why doesn't she hire a logo designer?
- doesnotexist0
try again