Logo crit
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- ukit0
Rounded font with tight spacing? How can I not like it.
- NotByHand0
Either is fine, Diego... but the "S" is killing me in conjunction with the other letters you have. It's the nonconformity of the stroke that bothers me, because you don't have that anywhere else.
Also, I would probably shorten the left side of the top line on the "Z" to get it a little further away from the "A" - similar to how the "S" is further away from the "A".I'm not meaning to sound as an ass or super-critical... I never normally get involved in the 'crit'-threads...
Anyway, looks nice :)
- VectorMasked0
Reminds me a lil of akrok's site.
...logo's aight. Seems pleasing enough to the eye actually and make me hungry.
and yes, I am a handsome designer.
- OSFA0
Thanks NBH, and yes, funny you mentioned the spacing between the A and Z, I was working on that after I posted. I've been playing also with the S and it's turning into a headache, Thanks!
Btw, which option works better?
- VectorMasked0
Both are equally weak and equally strong.
The circle doesn't really add anything other than what seems to be that very clean and sterile look... like black and white images with the bright yellow or magenta circle somewhere in a corner for that added punch.
Again they are both about the same, but the one without the circle might be more usable coz the circle might limit ya.
and yes, I am also an exceptional dude.
- OSFA0
I got you vector. b/w images with a 'punch' of magenta.. hmm, like this?
http://www.qbn.com/VectorMasked/…
;)
- kinda ;o)
good point though. gotta update that.VectorMasked - haha!OSFA
- kinda ;o)
- 5timuli0
And make sure your O overshoots the cap height and baseling just a tad, it looks too small in situ.
- VectorMasked0
I'd widen the A. Seems like the most uncomfortable letter there.
make it magenta FTW!
- janne760
yeah A needs more prominence, esp. over the dominant Z
- Scotch_Roman0
Agree with all of stimmers' input. I like the type overall, but to be honest I've never really been fond of slammed-in kerning. I don't think it will look too great at small sizes.
Ditch the circle. It will limit you severely.
- utopian0
It is shaping up:)
- janne760
yeah z is somewhat better now, a gets more space with it
- OSFA0
Great, now wtf can I do with the S?
- VectorMasked0
A seems a lil wide now. I'd narrow it. Move the S slightly closer to the A and possibly do something with the bottom of the S. The S could be a lil taller.
• note: I can't be held reliable for disastrous modifications.
- noooooooooooooojanne76
- s may be a weeee bit taller thoughjanne76
- OSFA, don't listen to chester.
;oPVectorMasked - the ´knee´ of the Z is now ever so slightly visible inside the legs of the A. buggin me a wee bit.
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