Logo crit
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- OSFA0
Answer: B
- Nairn0
Not sure what the rule is, but should the top and bottom curves of the o and the s match each other? O seems a touch less deep, no?
- OSFA0
Made a few tweaks and testing it now. Thanks for the helpful feedback ladies. It is looking better yes?
- VectorMasked0
Def looking better.
would be interesting to see it printed as small as .5 and .75in.
- version30
looks like if you print it small all these adjustments are just going to bleed out with ink anyway. done any print tests yet?
- lukus_W0
I really like this .. I think the larger O looks far better + more in keeping with the AZ_N.
Imo, I think it would be nicer with the accent placed horizontally (so that it mirrors the horizontal strokes in the Z) - but then maybe this would fck up the actual meaning of the accent? .. I don't know how far you can abstract accents in type.
The 's' still looks a little bit dodgy to me - maybe it would be possible to take the Z and hand trace a more geometric 'S' which might be more in keeping with the other letters.
- neverblink0
Like I said in the note 4 posts up:
could also work if you tried an upside down 2 for the S, if you're looking for something more symmetrical to the Z.
- OSFA0
where is everybody?
- OSFA0
Monday bump! Thanks.
- Hombre_Lobo0
Your welcome mate. Thought it might do that.
Good luck, keep us updated.ps nice pics on your flickr, nice office too! :D
- OSFA0
Thanks hombre, I did try the S similar to the Z but thought it didn't work, too symmetrical and it ended up looking like a weird W and became hard to read. I am working on the S, I am trying Gotham for it and also tweaking the S i currently have now (annoying circle at ends)
- Hombre_Lobo0
Looks very nice. really like it.
Think i prefer the word alone, without the circle.Something about the S stands out to me, people have mentioned spacing, which it may be.
Maybe its just because the S is the only curved letter aside from the O (which doesnt stand out because its a primary shape)
Maybe if the S was more like the Z - consisting of 3 straight lines, but if you did that the last 2 letters (O & N) would become a bit redundant...
It would look like you were going for a symmetrical logo - SOZ looking very good (and symmetrical), but then with a couple of letters jammed on the end...(hope that made sense)
Hmmm...Looks v nice though.
- Thanks!OSFA
- could also work if you tried an upside down 2 for the Sneverblink
- OSFA0
thanks utopian, I had tried VAG, ,but not Gotham, that might work!
- NoFavorite0
I like both options. With and without the circle. I think you should use them both for different things.
- utopian0
Did you try?
• VAG Rounded Black
• Gotham Rounded
- VectorMasked0
A seems a lil wide now. I'd narrow it. Move the S slightly closer to the A and possibly do something with the bottom of the S. The S could be a lil taller.
• note: I can't be held reliable for disastrous modifications.
- noooooooooooooojanne76
- s may be a weeee bit taller thoughjanne76
- OSFA, don't listen to chester.
;oPVectorMasked - the ´knee´ of the Z is now ever so slightly visible inside the legs of the A. buggin me a wee bit.
hawkwah
- OSFA0
Great, now wtf can I do with the S?