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  • NotByHand0

    Either is fine, Diego... but the "S" is killing me in conjunction with the other letters you have. It's the nonconformity of the stroke that bothers me, because you don't have that anywhere else.
    Also, I would probably shorten the left side of the top line on the "Z" to get it a little further away from the "A" - similar to how the "S" is further away from the "A".

    I'm not meaning to sound as an ass or super-critical... I never normally get involved in the 'crit'-threads...

    Anyway, looks nice :)

    • damn, 'nonconformity = non-uniformity"NotByHand
    • Wow. NBH, remind me to bug you anytime I need a crit. very thorough and great advice.era4O4

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