La vida de un diseñador
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- melocottona
hi!!
my last work for charming people over here :)
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hope you like it!!
thanks
- OhYeah0
- hahaha. one of the best palmfaces i've seenshowpony
- jejeej soorrrrryyyyyy ejejejej love this facemelocottona
- aaaahahahaaa!nicole_marie
- hahahahahaMeeklo
- melocottona0
I don´t know why you cant see it !!!
here is the link:
thanks
- harlequino0
Super cute, and well executed!
IMHO: I feel like you could still look at how it's edited and the flow of the story, even as short as it is. The way it ended was a little odd. Felt a little more like a collection of still moments, than a story with a beginning, middle, and end. It was right after he was drawing in the sky, that I sort of lost the thread of continuity.
Also, might be really neat if it was black and white, and the vfx were in color. But that's just my aesthetic creeping in. :)
Again, really well done!
- melocottona0
thanks a lotttttttttt :) :) you make me happy :)
talking about the end, in my opinion it's like you are thinking all day in creative things and when you go to rest and take the newspaper all of the things that you have allready thiked come to your head again
Sorry for my explanation it's hard to do in english!!
thanks anyway :)
- harlequino0
Oh I understand what you are saying, not a problem. And I certainly understand your creative approach.
I'm just saying that the end as you have it now, feels like a "middle," not an "end." I think since we are all very used to seeing short form on the web, we tend to expect a clear ending, especially when a story hinges on visual effects.
I think it would feel more complete to me if the character were to walk off into the evening, or maybe go home. Something like, those are just examples and my own interpretation. That's all. :)
Again, it's a really nice piece regardless.
- melocottona0
your criticism is very constructive !!!!! thanks a lot!!
- melocottona0
:) :) :)
- sea_sea0
me encanta cuando va cruzando la calle y dibuja en el aire, jeje coool. want to see more! :)
- melocottona0
milll graciassss :) jeje en realidad solo es un proyecto para mi!! por que no tengo trabajo pero tengo que practicar. . . asi que tengo que pensar en algo nuevo para hacer ejejej
- melocottona0
thanks a lotttt :) :) :) is only a proyect for me, cause I don't have a job and I nedd to practise, and now . . . I have to think in a new proyect, still I wait to get a job
- Meeklo0
muy bonito!
- sureshot0
si si esta muy bonito
- akrokdesign0
nice work, cabron. lol. ...muy bien.
- melocottona0
muchisismas graciasss !!