La vida de un diseñador
La vida de un diseñador
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- harlequino0
Oh I understand what you are saying, not a problem. And I certainly understand your creative approach.
I'm just saying that the end as you have it now, feels like a "middle," not an "end." I think since we are all very used to seeing short form on the web, we tend to expect a clear ending, especially when a story hinges on visual effects.
I think it would feel more complete to me if the character were to walk off into the evening, or maybe go home. Something like, those are just examples and my own interpretation. That's all. :)
Again, it's a really nice piece regardless.